Another Short Poem

[Geonitacka]

here's a new old poem I wrote

Foolish Love

Love is for fools
when you think they love you,
They up and leave you pretending to be cool.
You end up crying feeling blue,
Feeling cold like betrayal
wanting to plunge to death.
Thinking that in love you always fail
not telling, with secrets kept.

Mind pushing thoughts recalled,
wanting to be with them but about to fall.
Proof needed yet still your denied,
Needing someone to confide.
Being swept away by presence alone,
Confessing your love, but interrupted and left standing cold.



I wrote this after a relationship & beginning of another and kinda didn't know how to put it in words.

 

[Krystal]

Hmmmm I'd say you did a very good job! :yeey

 

[Geonitacka]

aww thnx Krystal

 

[NODE1]

that was pretty cool i liked it cause it happends it life and love

 

[EL_BORICUA_72]

Very very touching I likes

 

[Heavenly]

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW SITTTTTTTTTTTTT THATS MY COUZ!!!! :yeey

Poets in DA FAMILIA 😉

P.S.....and ummm WHAT Relationship young lady we need to talk

 

[Geonitacka]

lol heavenly..............im not telling :blah

 

[Heavenly]

lol heavenly..............im not telling :blah

URGGGGGGGGG 😡 lol

 

[Geonitacka]

:angel

 

[Crystal2001]

You know what..this talent does run in the family..😉

Your a natural sweety..Keep them coming!!

 

[Geonitacka]

awwwwwwwwwww thnx 😀 im so happy now even tho da stupid chat isn't letting me on its ok now

 

[Crystal2001]

Thank god your back in..LOL!!..and no problem mama!

 

[Geonitacka]

I know

 

[Heavenly]

You know what..this talent does run in the family..😉

Your a natural sweety..Keep them coming!!

awwwwwwwwwwwww crys you're a sweety

 

[Geonitacka]

she was talkin to me!! LOL

 

[Heavenly]

I know she WAS 😛 sheesh I was just commenting that Crys is a sweetie......HAHAHAHA

 

[Geonitacka]

whatever