Admired From Afar C,P, 2003

[mannyriv]

"Admired From Afar" C,P, 2003 M. Rivera Music


I send her flowers,
Without leaving my name,
Don't think that I'm ashamed,
To admit,
I love her,
I'm just so afraid,
She'll turn my love away.

She reads to me the letters,
That I write everyday,
She don't know,
I'm trying to tell her,
What I really want to say.

I've been watching you from afar,
I love you just the way you are,
I would love,
to be a part,
Of your life.
I've been admiring you,
From afar,
Just like a distant star,
You have got me wishing,
Everynight,
That someday,
I'll make you mine.

 

[musiclady2424]

Damn This Poem Just Makes Me Melt Inside :woo The Words Are So Wow. Somthing You Daydream:it Feels Like Something That Is Said In A Movie.i Think That Should Go In A Book.that Was A Great Poem Manny . I Love It You Go Man.with You Bad Self. That Is Something A Lot Of Us Use To Feel About Our First Crushes.lol Wow Thumbs Up Sweetie.....

 

[CoOl_AL_FrM_qNs]

diablo manny te la botaste con esa mi pana 😉 those r some deep words bro high 5 for my partner in crime

 

[La Mas Grande]

HEY MANNY, LOVE IT SWEETIE

:wave

 

[atx]

beautiful poem!! it's so sweet and sincere! good job!

 

[melissa figueroa]

nice manny you go boy lol......That was how i felt with my first love ..but im sure now i can find a diiferent one for how i feel now..lol

 

[musiclady2424]

lol yup thats true the man got skills{ big time} writing , singing , dancing , making beats ,his own at that.....wow. writing his own lyrics and poetry. what more can we ask from an artist ..so talented he's also a great friend to me......with a heart of gold..go manny man god bless you..i learned a lot from this man.. even how to take a long burping contest lol....he dared me once to post it lol. that shit was the most embassing thing i ever did. lol but it was fun... love ya manny keep them coming pa....lol

 

[G_I_JOE_EMR]

:hpound Nice poem. Wish I was the :girl in it.
:lol

 

[musiclady2424]

lol
wooo hoo. see that was a touching poem.i think soo.i hope to see more.

 

[mannyriv]

Thank you. I am glad you really enjoy it. Thanks Cool Al, Lamasgrande, aka LaMasPoetic, ATX, Melissa, Musiclady,G_I_Joe_EMR, and Musiclady2424 aka Lyriclady, my good friend and songwritting partner. (This girl got skills on the poetic tip too, not just at burping LOL)

 

[musiclady2424]

lol
thank manny i'm a good singer better then writing. lol
nah just kidding yeah i'm a singer ,writer ,dancer and a good friend .wooohoooo wowo it,s hotin herre. but yeah.lol i can burp only when under the influence lol.

 

[Edalgiere]

what do u mean first crushes some of us feel that all the time

 

[mzcrazybtch]

oh damn this is sweet.

love it manny!

 

[Krystal]

Maaaaaaaaaaanny!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it! When we gonna hear it? 😛

 

[JOEDOCPA]

good Job Manny

 

[mannyriv]

Thank you guys!!!!!!!!

 

[musiclady2424]

Hello Eldagiere How Are You...

what do u mean first crushes some of us feel that all the time

YES YOUR RIGHT ..I KNOW EXACTLY WHAT YOU EMAN ALOT OF OF DO FEEL THIS OFTEN .I SHOULD HAVE CORRECTED THAT ..I'M SORRY...BUT YES SOME OF US WANT WHAT WE CAN'T HAVE OR WANT WHAT DOES NOT WANT US OR JUST MIGHT BE AFRAID OR JUST HURT SO MANY TIMES OR LIKE A MARRIED PERSON,AND CAN ONLY ADMIRE THEM FROM AFAR...OR JUST WANT TO ADMIRE FROM AFAR OR.MAKE LOVE TO THAT PERSON IN THEIR MIND FROM AFAR ..YES A LOT OF THINGS RELATE TO THAT POEM..I SHOULD HAVE CORRECTED MY SELF. BUT I DID NOT..BUT I STILLL LIKE THE POEM.MIGHT I ADD YES YOUR RIGHT ON THAT COMMENT.[STATMENT] LOL LOL WOOOHOO...I FELT THAT TOO AND MABYE AT TIMES I CAN FEEL LIKE THAT TTOOO.A LOT OF US HERE FEEL THAT WAY ABOUT SOMEONE. BUT WE WON'T TELL .SOME OF US ARE MARRIED OR HAVE A RELATIONSHIP.AND YES BLAH BLAH BLAH ANY HOW
IT'S A REAL ISSUE YOU BROUGHT UP .LOL
THANKS FOR LETTING ME KNOW.LOL