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All three poems are amazingly well written. Talented is what you are!...:yeey
 
am i hurt not at all,
when i walk i stand proud and tall,
my words r true yes indeed,
im like a stallion like a noble steed,
my words come out just like ur breath,
it goes and comes out in less that a sec,
am i hurt not at all i say,
just want find my true love one day,
i can picture her hair and picture smile,
and to be with her would be worth my while,
ill give her the shirt off back,
ill feed her grapes for a little snack,
ill rub her back and her thighs too,
and the rest is for adults how old r u?
 
TIGER

i'm just like WOW! ur so talented.. it's incredible... you're making words into poems as you go... this takes a big talent!
Hope you keep this up Tiger!

Damn, if any guy just made a poem for me like that.... I think i'd melt......... :hearton
 
u think u would melt how much of that is true,
cause if u would melt i would get a glass for u,
i would fill u up in this jar,
and have u next to me even in my car,
when i c a flower i would let a drop out,
when i see a water fountain ill place a drop in the spout,
ill walk in the grass and look in the clouds,
and let a drop out to take away my frowns,
but most of all what i would do is pour u in the ocean,
so the world can c the beauty i c in u--tiger3229
 
wow tony tiger.i didn't know you had it in you.who won't want a guy to write them a poem like that.
 
Oh damn,
I maybe too young for you,
But hey,
No one never said that your dreams couldnt come true.
Excuse me if you may,
but I am in shock with your beautiful words,
just keep what your doing,
and I promise you that you will find your true love one day...
:hearton

Damn we are good..LMAO
 
crystal, u say we r good i no its true,
cause when i close my eyes all i c is u,
i c ur smile and i want to smile back,
i hear ur laughter and it makes me laugh back,
i feel ur touch and it makes me want u so much,
but when i lie down ur not there,
i look and i look for u everywhere,
where can u be i cant feel u,
but am i dreaming or is this realy true,
when u read these words the truth will show,
if u sit there and smile its called love cause i no----
 
😱

Wow...(looking around)
Was that for me?
Do I deserve all these kind words?
You are such a sweetie...😀

Damn, I could have said more, but crystal is speechless at the moment..lmao..That was beautiful!
 
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