A Broken Peace

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A Broken Peace

I wish that today never existed.
I wish that yesterday never came to be.
I wish that tomorrow would never come.

I have lost my will, I have lost my sanity, and I have lost everything.

All for the price of one who no longer remains.

I have seen the world. I've seen it's cruelty and I feel that I do not want to no longer be apart of it. To live in sin is to be a sinner. So help me God! ..... Please let it end!

I grow weaker and weaker without my 1 strength. I grow into a state of
confusion. If only....if only.

What can I do? There is not much that I can say accept that I dont want to feel this way. I will close my eyes
and dream a long dream so that I can envision my strength right next to me.
If and then I were to wake up I will let it all end. For i've seen the world,
and it's cruelty.

© The Originator!
 
Orgntr1

Very nice. I love your style I love your writing so far of what Ive read. 😀

I related to that many times.

~Antonio
 
Wow, that was beautiful! There was something about the poem that touched. It reminds me of someone. maybe me? I sometimes feel that way, well anyhows, that was really beautiful, keep it up babe!..😉
 
That Was Awsome Work.it Touched.i've Felt That Feeling I Have Felt An Anxiety.and It Resembled Those Feeling Written On There.i Love It.it's Just This Site Alone Allows Us To Flow.our Feeling To Be Related For Others To Read.and Everytime I Read A Page I Find Onother Persons Frame.the Story. The Feelings Of Life .good
 
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