Unfinished Duet

[Dayer]

This isn't done yet but I figured I'd post it for opinions 😉

(m)
Girl, If only you
Could understand the pain I feel
In my heart
Then you
Would understand that my love is real
It was from the start

(f)
Boy, If only you
Never would have treated me
So so bad
Well then you
Never would have had to see
Me so sad

(f)And it hurts so bad
(m)So now I'm asking

(m)Why, why did you leave me
(f)You, you chose to deceive me
(m)I, I was too blind to see
(f)This, this love could never be

(m)And now I'm here alone
(f)You're sitting by the phone
(m)I'm waiting for that call
(f)Never gave me your all
(m)I miss you more and more
(f)You never cared before

(m)I need you next to me

(f)
Boy, you only really cared about yourself
It was you that mattered and nobody else
That selfish attitude you had drove me away
So blame yourself for my not being there today

(m)
Girl, you never even said that you loved me
You wanted me around for all your friends to see
I tried to talk to you, you had nothing to say
So blame yourself for not having me today

 

[Martini]

Haahahahaaa. I luvvv it. Great lyrics!!!!!!!

Kinda what my ex whines to me everyday!!!!! hahhahaaaa

 

[Dayer]

I have so many songs written its actually kinda scary.

I have to meet a producrt on friday so hopefully things will go well & He'll use some of my lyrics.

 

[jackyjac33]

let me know

how did you get the deal?

it's da bomb

 

[Dayer]

Don't have a deal yet. My husbands job made him work late which screwed me out of my meeting which will have to be rescheduled.

I honestly don't know if any of my lyrics will ever get used but writing/singing freestyle is all I really ever wanted & I have to go for it 🙂

 

[JackG]

That sounds great dayer!

 

[Desejo]

i like

 

[Dayer]

Oh My God...

I haven't checked this section in so long that I didn't know my post was bumped!

Thanks Jack & Des 🙂

This song (if I ever get it out there) wont be out for a while as I am working on a different song at the moment.

 

[Desejo]

why unfinished??? what needs to be done? rsvp to my email as well if u feel the need..
~Desejo

 

[MakeYaDance]

Still waiting for an ending Dayer. I love it.

 

[Dayer]

Unfinished Because

I write everything w/o a beat. I work out a rough medley on a keyboard but until I hook up with a dj, producer or whatever it remains unfinished because I don't know where to put a bridge or how long the chorus needs to be, if the words fit the rhythm etc.

Des, I don't think I ever got e-mail from you except about a cd that I never got 🙂 e-mail me @ dayer2k1@aol.com

 

[Liz_Torres]

GREAT LYRICS........

DID YOU COPYWRITE YOUR MATERIAL?
IF NOT I SUGGEST YOU DO!


GOOD STUFF, GIRL

 

[MIDNIGHTeternal]

dayer..... dayam gurl, that was incredible....

keep freestyle alive.

 

[Dayer]

Liz...

No, I never got my stuff copywritten.

Never saw a reason to ya know? After things fell through with the guy I was working with, I guess I just kinda put this dream behind me ya know?

Thanks for the compliments everyone 🙂

 

[La Mas Grande]

there goes my gurl.........

 

[ChuckD]

more old posts coming back. glad they did. Nice work

 

[mzcrazybtch]

now that's real nice, D....I like the fact that you have both points of view.