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as i reached out to touch her hand,
i new this was the last time i would be her man,
what do i do what do i say,
for she is leaving this earth today,
her breathing is so slow she cant say a word,
how i wish i could give her my life so she could be as free as a bird,
my heart just aches like it about to explode,
but all i no is she will be gone and never again will her i hold,
i run my fingers down the side of her face,
she gives me a small smile and i give her an imbrace,
her eyes can hardly open she can barley c,
o how i wish that could be me,
i would give her my time here on earth,
just so can live and c what life is worth,
i hold her hand tightly cause i dont want her to go,
but the lord is the master and he has her soul,
i hear the machines beebs get slowler and slower,
how i wish this was a dream and i would wake and it would all be over,
i hold her hand next to my face,
to let her no ill mis her warm imbrace,
as the sounds gets slower and then i hear her say,
(this is my last breath, im sorry it had to be this way)
i tell her (no baby u didnt do anything wrong,
u were my best friend my love and companion,
u were the one that let me have love,
u let me hold u threw the nights like a hand in a glove,
u were the best friend i ever had,
and im glad to have u in my life u made me glad,
u gave me a smile upon my face,
u mad me fall in love with u as big as outerspace,
u didnt do anything wrong dont ever think that,
when u get to heaven ask for my friend jack,
he will show u around from here to there,
and just be patiant cause i will soon be there),
as i saw a tear roll down her cheek,
the look in her eyes made me so weak,
as she took her last breath and her eyes closed,
i said (baby i love more than ull ever no)-------tiger3229
 
OMG the is Beautiful....:sosad

Did this really happened?? My heart is with you man.....damn my troubles literally went out the door....🙁
 
Wow that was beautiful 🙁

I too wonder, did this really happen tiger?

~Antonio
 
you know tiger out of all the poems you've sent me, this has to be the most heart wrenching one of all:sosad

if this really happened I felt your pain, and if it was something that just came to your mind, you must have a heart as big as the sea, to find that kind of love in your mind and transform them to words.

I only know of one other person who's words move me into another dimension.

good job tony.
 
I will have to agree with Nyasia.....I truly felt your pain when I read it.
 
Wow sweety, that was so beautiful...Just reading it brought a tear to my eyes. Whether this happend to you or not, my heart still goes out to you..Beautiful writing sweety!
 
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