Remember Me?

[FreestyleChulo]

as i walked through the eternal flame'
to see that the lust i feel is brought in vain
to feel your voice against my lips
my hands glide towards uncommon bliss
between the tides, the ocean's flow
and notice that our lust will grow
no need to breathe since we are dead
seductive strides across my bed
rose ptals blue and bleed of white
our bodies embracing throughout the night
remember me? the one u crave
remember me? the one u saved
the time has come to let you rest
upon my arms you shall feel blessed
letting blood flow beneath your wings
as puppets in heaven can pull our strings
remember me? the one you adore
the one that you want to caress once more
open your eyes and reveal your own truth
you get what you wish for and i wished for you

 

[precious one]

Nice poem Chulo!

 

[Enigma]

What a great poem FreestyleChulo! 😀

~Antonio

 

[FreestyleChulo]

thanx peeps.....this was actually sparked wen i read "hot shower" by crystal.....

 

[Company B]

WOW!

I really liked it!

: P

 

[Crystal2001]

OMG..I loved it sweety...I loved it a lot...And the poem I made.."Hot shower"..made you create this wonderful poem?? naw babes..Thats all you..😉

 

[FreestyleChulo]

crystal....
you can say that my poem is a reaction to yours......just got me thinking of a certain situation.....

 

[Taz X.T.R.]

Very nice!!

 

[angelus305]

Hi Chulo, your poem was awesome. I liked it alot. Do some more, Please??? lol jk. You have some talent. Keep up the good work.

 

[FreestyleChulo]

no doubt angelus....since i havent seen u here b4....welcome to CF

 

[Crystal2001]

Ohhh I see..my poems be doing that to you a lot lately...LOL

 

[FreestyleChulo]

well crystal..keep talkin bout hot showers and thongs...etc...and u will get this reaction every time!