my thoughts...

[Dayer]

My eyes, they do deceive me
But my heart, it never lies
My mind refuses to see
But my heart's forever wise
My happiness, found in you
But my sadness never fades
I think that I can love too
Save for darkness, black as spades
I wonder, if you love me
If you'd prove it with a kiss
In shadows, where they can't see
Just one moment, lovers bliss
& I wonder as I write this
What you'll think, when it gets read
& I pray that you will find this
Before I shoot myself dead...

 

[Enigma]

Niiiiiiiiicee!!! 😀 I like your writing!

 

[Dayer]

ty & likewise 😉

 

[La Mas Grande]

Nice writing just that ending makes me want to :splat

 

[Dayer]

the ending makes you want to beat me with a fish? Leave my ex outta this

 

[Enigma]

fishies hurt 😛

 

[La Mas Grande]

the ending makes you want to beat me with a fish? Leave my ex outta this

Oh man thats just nasty.............. yuckie poo

 

[Dayer]

well wtf biatch you started it!

 

[La Mas Grande]

All I was saying was that you needed to get splat for thinking of or never mind. Still yuckie poo.....

 

[ChuckD]

Smack! Right on the face with a flounder!


btw, nice poem.

 

[Krystal]

Nicely done! Could have done without the last line though!

 

[Dayer]

ty Chuckie & K-Jin

**throws fish stix @ LMG**

 

[nessa's302]

VERY NICE MAMITA :yeey

 

[mzcrazybtch]

what's with all this fish talk?

btw: great poem

 

[Dayer]

ty mama & don't ask 😉