my private feelings {poem}by music lady2424

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Thinking of you from a distance;
fell in love in an instant;
i don;t have any idea what i'm doing;
but i know what i'm feeling;it's crazy the chances we take in life;
but we'll never know until we try,
so how i found you is the reason
why i say it was gods idea'
and how crazy i'am my sefl
cause i know my situation'
i just want happiness,do i have it'
am i confused,is it all in my head'
is it just an illusion'
mabye just an obsession'
do i really know what to do'
living in this world itself'
it is really taking a chance'
to a daily taskand oh '
the walks through are dark paths'
we're never given a guide to life'
taking a chance any way not knowing the out come'
we risk and we risk'
just you and i will make it last'
take a chance be together once at last'
for the very first time'
i've waited long enough'
almost denied and doubted your trust'
finally your near'
finally you will be here am i being selfish'
or am i being selfless'
taking a path that leadsoutr way'
or should i lead the other way'
i love the but there 's unhappy ness'
and a half way torn heart '
that aches inside of me '
from dark places of pain endured'
i've held within my heart'
from our start heart ache '
and all was some time fake'
so i rested my pain'
what would you do '
if you kept it in'
betrayal'can you take it and erase it'
or get over it and save it'you live '
and you learn but you stay and you still love'
but i can't no more the truth has appraoched me'
i love from afar'
i admire what you are'
strong and devoted' i'
i loved you but you controlled me'
i'm trying to hold on''
but i'm slipping so what i call it'
recentment :
recentment is a mutha !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!a '
it's the blinds that open as we age'we get older and wiser
so recent ment :recent ment "
recenting it is what i feel.!!!
 
to boricuacherry 2004 thats whats up good poem i like it keep up the good work yo i hope they like it i wish i could do that i want one for you could put it up for me i am going to write down okay bye
 
musiclady2424 said:
to boricuacherry 2004 thats whats up good poem i like it keep up the good work yo i hope they like it i wish i could do that i want one for you could put it up for me i am going to write down okay bye
ok i see now ,i did not leave this reply to my self ,i've never have .i don't know who was on my account. but i will find out.i'm sorry about this misunderstanding. {ps thanks grande for the info}
 
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