My Night's of Doubt.

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Pressure of screams relentlessly shrieking in my dome.
They ask me "If i die tonight, what would be my home?"
And I reply without a blink..... "Heaven, i think..."
Then even more loudly it asks,
"Does anyone give a damn about me??"
And I can't say I know of anyone who does...
Don't know anyone who will drop their things, to show me love.
Except for my Father above, I don't know if anyone really cares.
No one to stop me from bleeding, by simply putting their hand near.
So when I don't speak,
And my eyes are red and wet on my cheek...
Don't ask me why.
Don't tell me "everything will be alright."
Don't pretend to care, when you know the tru fact.
Cuz tomorrow when i look for your support, all i'll see is your back...


-midnight <the eternalist>
 
Love your poetic writing Eternalist 😉

Very deep! 🙂

~Antonio Martinez
 
I was the first one who read this poem...:tounge ..LOL!!! Before it was posted on CF!! hahahahaha..LMAO! Ok ok ok..I already said how much I liked this poem, but..Ill say it again..I really really liked this one..You put so much feeling into it...I felt what you felt as I read it. People have turned thier back on me..many times..But NEVER turned my back on anyone. You can rely on me..Im a nice girl...LOL...Listen..If anyone turned thier back on you sweety, they aint worth it..there not friends...Got that?..MUAHZZZZ..And once again..Great poem!:hearton
 
thanx hermosa...
and yes everyone, Crystal was the first to read this poem... i sent it to her before i posted it on CF, and she's the one who encouraged me to put it on the board.... i'm glad you enjoyed it mami.... take care, stay perfect.

One.luv
 
wow, that's some good wording put together!

that's quite a poem... I really like the idea behind it.

show us more of your talent Midnight!

ciao 4 now
 
Midnight..Me?? perfect???..NAWWWWWWW..Ya got the wrong girl..LMAOO!!!! No prob sweety..Ya know im there for you!!...😉
 
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