Ummm...this is one of my very first attempts at a love poem. I wrote this about 2 yrs ago. (when i was so foolish & too young to understand love..who knoz maybe i still am) Well i jus wanna see what other ppl think of this poem... Plz dont be harsh
LOST LOVE
Tragically left alone in this world,
Desperately lookin for the one,
All this love is done.
Between you and me,
There lingers a shadow of our once shared love.
A lost soul of a girl,
Roaming the world trying to find her boy.
Now long lost from eachother,
Our love begins to wither away...
Into someone's heart,
Till do us part,
My love I'll never let you go.
LOST LOVE
Tragically left alone in this world,
Desperately lookin for the one,
All this love is done.
Between you and me,
There lingers a shadow of our once shared love.
A lost soul of a girl,
Roaming the world trying to find her boy.
Now long lost from eachother,
Our love begins to wither away...
Into someone's heart,
Till do us part,
My love I'll never let you go.
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