LOSING AT LOVE(copywritten2002) suicide

[lonely4eva]

I lived 4 love but in the end I died,
my heart was ripped out so I committed suicide...

I figured without my heart how can I survive,
when the one person I loved took away what kept me alive...

so now here I am looking down from above upon everyone that I love...

why is it that they look so sad,
I guess I did'nt realize that what I did would have the effect it had...

but now it's 2 late and I can't rewind,
I did'nt see that If I held on then one day true love I'd find...

so I took the easy way out I chose 2 go,
not realizing what tomorrow would bring I guess I'll never know...

now I cry tears from heaven mixed with rain drops falling from the sky
2 my family and friends I did'nt want 2 say goodbye...

I can't change what's been done I must accept my fate,
Just think before u do because tomorrow is 2 late...:realsad

U ONLY GET 1 CHANCE ON THIS EARTH KEEP THIS IN MIND,
BECAUSE THE REAL TRAGEDY IS WHAT HAPPENS TO THOSE WHO
GET LEFT BEHIND...

 

[ARTISTDLA]

wow that poem was amazing...they best one yet...very very deep....i just hope that u dont do what you say....dont kill ur self over a girl.....you are a great guy and no women who treats you like shit you dont deserve....😉.....i love this poem.....😉

 

[diamondgurl]

WOW ! this is amazing,tugged at my heart.

 

[lonely4eva]

This is not a poem I wrote because I was depressed or wanted 2 commit suicide. It's a poem I wrote 4 anyone that is depressed and thinking of suicide. The message behind this poem is don't kill yourself over no relationship because it's not worth it so think before u do something u will regret...😀

 

[ARTISTDLA]

TRUE THAT.....I SAID THE SAME THING BUT I TOUGHT THAT YOU WERE TRYIN TO COMMIT SUCIDE SORRY BOUT THAT.....I LOVE IT THOUGH I FELT IT.....THE POEM WAS DEEP.....😉

 

[lonely4eva]

I'm not the depressed suicidal person that some people may think I am. I mean writing poetry is my way of releasing my pain. I would never hurt myself because I know that life is 2 precious to end prematurely. I try 2 write poems that other people can relate 2 because they might be going through a similar situation. Hopefully people read this and have a better understanding of who I am as a person....

 

[Coro'sGirl]

loney ur very talented that one got me all emotional :sosad

 

[Fernanda]

Very beautiful and very true too.