Lines of Wisdom...

[8th-Sin]

"Words of Wisdom and experience,
Take your time to make coherence,
And save your soul from this dark room,
Since all you do leads to your doom,
You can waste your strength and might,
But all your efforts die tonight,
'Cause you’re stuck in a endless well,
So cold its burn is worse than hell,
Demons lurk in every corner,
Draggin' you in deep and further,
Soon you find the flesh and bones,
Of all those who died alone,
Now heed my word and choose your path,
But beware life's deadly wrath!"

 

[Enigma]

This is mighty impressive writing 8th-er 🙂

You left me awwwwing bro 😉

To this day...do you continue writing?

Great work!

~Antonio 😎

 

[8th-Sin]

not in years man... not in years...

 

[Nyasia]

splendid indeed.😉 that is why I say what I say...

 

[NESSAVA]

I like it very much!!! Beautiful 🙂

Thanks for the wisdom but you still didnt answer my question LoL :angel

 

[precious one]

Nice poem!

 

[BensonhurstChick]

HMMMMM.... WHAT QUESTION DIDNT HE ANSWER?..I DIDNT SEE A QUESTION IN THIS THREAD ANYWHERE...8TH GREAT POEM MAN.. 😉

 

[NESSAVA]

LoL Nikki 😛 You're right there is no question HERE :stoned

 

[Nyasia]

nessa , if it's about the 26th, most likely.

 

[Sexyangel329]

YO THATS DEEP KINDA SCURRY TO YOU GO PECADO ON THE DARKSIDE THERE BUDDY BUT VERY NICE GOOD WORK KEEP THEM COMMING.

NIKI NOW AINT THAT CUTE NAYA I TELL YALL GIRL 😉

 

[Nyasia]

yeah really cute..lol😉

 

[freestylevet]

oh me, oh my!!!

You have written another awesome poem.

I ask the same question Ant did...you continue to write?

WOW!!!!!!!😉

 

[8th-Sin]

thanks again... no I don't write anymore... it's been years since i have writen anything new. I lost alot of my work when I moved. I just remember a few by heart. Glad you all liked them. I wasn't sure about posting this one. I thought it would be a little too dark for CF. hehehe...

 

[Crystal2001]

Hey babes..That poem was phuckin great...Ya know, you really should think about writing again, your work is one of a kind..😉