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La Mas Grande

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Turbulent romance, filled with uncertainty

Energy filled moments, with despair in site

Quiet glances, secretly telling you what lies with in

Unify in our quest for just one last kiss

Immense feeling of loneliness, in a room minus you

Enslaved by the chose that was made for us so long ago

Reaching yet never grasping each other

Overwhelmed by this feeling of lost

Mystify by each other’s feelings wondering if it all an

Infatuation gone wrong

Admission of wrong doing, for I’m to blame just as you

Mistress is a title I shall never bear

Omission of truth I have never told

Recalling us with love is what I shall do…



Remember I almost gave it all to you



 
See what I mean? Brilliant! Such flow of lovely yet powerful and meaningful words. I truly admire the way your heart and mind speaks 😉

Very lovely La Mas Grande! :yeey
 
*blushes* Thank you so much hon, it really means alot to me to read that. I write for myself and I'm my own worst critic, so when some one says something like that, it does wonders for me. muah
 
That poem was short and sweet just like you 😉

Sorry couldn't resist! :losmile
 
Awesome LaMasGrande! You really write beautifully..
 
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