Insecurity

[Orgntr1]

Just when i thought i found the perfect girl in my life
Just when I thought it couldnt get any better.
Just when I felt the beat of my heart grow

I am consumed in insecurity.
Everybody wants you.
How ironic.
I dont see my place in this.
You have everyone.
Be with anyone.
I dont see my purpose then.
Every guy thinks like me about you.
They will act like me.
Look for you.
Can't blame them.
I can't compete.
Your reaction to them is the same reaction you give me.
I know what will probably happen.
Can't blame you.
I dont see my purpose then.
......I am consumed in insecurity.

Just when I thought I found the perfect girl in my life.
Just when I thought it couldnt get any better.
Just when I felt the beat of my heart grow.

.......sadly, you were never the one.

Goodbye.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

Okay Org, this has to be about a real girl. Is she a member here on CF or outside of it? Very sad poem. 🙁 Ahhhhhhhhhh, you made me feel like :sosad

 

[Orgntr1]

All my poems are from experience. She knows who she is.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

All my poems are from experience. She knows who she is.

:shush........Well take it easy man. Experience is experience. It's how you use it your benefit. Keep that tip! Okay? 😉

 

[Orgntr1]

I learned alot. Thanks Boop.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

I learned alot. Thanks Boop.

No prob. Anytime. 🙂 But very good poetry. Loved it.

 

[1sxychica]

that was good 🙁 i dont think u should give up this easy

 

[atx]

Beautiful.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

Beautiful.

Yes he went off with this poem.

 

[atx]

Yes he went off with this poem.

I AGREE, ALL OF HIS WORK IS ORIGINAL AND THE MOST BEAUTIFUL I'VE EVER HAD THE PRIVILEGE TO READ. SOME LEAVES ME...SPEECHLESS.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

Well Org is very talented from what I see. And I guess he feels what he writes. That's why it's so good.

 

[La Mas Grande]

Very nice sweety but i must agree with everyone its also sad.

🙁

 

[crazygirl]

this poem is very nice
i like it

 

[pinostyle]

Feelin' your pain bro.....been there b4!
Just remember...the best way to forget about the "last one" is to move on to the "next one"
Weird, have to heal a broken heart to have it broken again! Just a thought....

 

[Orgntr1]

Thanks to all.

 

[Orgntr1]

Feelin' your pain bro.....been there b4!
Just remember...the best way to forget about the "last one" is to move on to the "next one"
Weird, have to heal a broken heart to have it broken again! Just a thought....

....I dont think so. Though the pain is gone from me, I see shadows of it. I'm going to begin to value myself more. Thank you though pinostyle.

 

[myonlysweetie]

Beautiful...but :sosad !!

 

[Melly22]

aye ben dito..🙁

 

[musiclady2424]

That Is So Sad But True. Like A Friend Once Told Me Better To Stay Alone And Mend Your Heart.and Learn More About You..then To Start Looking For The Next To Do The Same Thing Again And Get Hurt.just Live And Learn.i Love Your Poetry.it's So Touching And Real. You Have Big Fans On Here .look Forward To Reading On More Poems. Take It Easy. Just Let Your Self Flow Into Mending.you'll Glow Again.