If You Love Me - Copyright Mkz 2002

[shakespeareinluv]

ok, i've recieved 4 different requests from ladies to write songs for them/people they know for different reasons. so i'm gonna have to expand my horizon and TRY, and i do mean TRY to write songs for girls. here is my first attempt. (is this trial by fire or what?)

Tell me why
Tell my why are you so scared
To bring your love my way
Cause I
Want to give you all of me
Wish for you to just love me

But each time I hold you close
You ask to be free, I can’t let go

If you love me boy
I need to hear you say
That you see us together
If you love me boy
Please don’t make me wait
Cause I can’t hold on forever

Boy I know
I know the pain that you’ve been through
You’re so afraid it’s just too soon
And I know
It’s so hard for you to try
With tears of pain fresh in your eyes

And each time I hold you close
You ask to be free, I can’t let go

If you love me boy
I need to hear you say
That you see us together
If you love me boy
Please don’t make me wait
Cause I can’t hold on forever

Don’t look back boy on the past
Trust in me to make this last
Let me kiss the tears away
With my love you’re heart is safe

If you love me boy
I need to hear you say
That you see us together
If you love me boy
Please don’t make me wait
Cause I can’t hold on forever

 

[NESSAVA]

Very nice! I really like it

 

[musiclady2424]

man this is a man with great talent.he deserves an award for his good talent/i think this man is a great one.i know that i cannot write a song in[20min]
it takes me like 2 months just to write one.i guess you should give this man his propts.....he posseses some i'll lyrics and skills.....i give u your props,and one day u will write my music for a living
hah lol ....but foreal!

 

[shakespeareinluv]

too kind ladies. thank you as always

 

[vixen]

OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!! THAZZZ AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

NOW U CAN WRITE ME A SONG...LOL

 

[Lamatrix]

See what I mean Medy? Awesome work Shakepeare.

 

[clubfossil]

HEY!

NICE JOB LIKE ALWAYS...SHAKE...FREDDIE

 

[shakespeareinluv]

 

[shakespeareinluv]

ty freddie. you've always been good to me.

 

[freestylequeen4u]

you gonna write a song for me now?

 

[shakespeareinluv]

depends. what are you gonna do for me?

 

[brokenhearted]

i'll give u a great big hug if you write one for me. and if i get teary eyed, i'll even kiss u. lol

 

[clubfossil]

HEY!

HEY YOU YEAH YOU WHAT R U STILL DOING UP?LOLOL...FREDDIE

 

[shakespeareinluv]

a hug and maybe a kiss? that's seems like a pretty good deal. lol.

 

[clubfossil]

NAW

NO HUGS OR KISSES...A GOOD POEM FOR ME WOULD BE JUST FINE.LMFAOOOOOOOOOO...FREDDIE:nono :whistle :nono