I let myself die

[Crystal2001]

My head hurts,
My stomach aches,
Im getting dizzy,
How long must I wait?
Another attack,
I feel coming on,
Im begining to sweat,
I cant stand this for so long.
I hear a whisper,
"Are you alright?"
I answer back,
"Just feelin a bit tight".
Aint that the truth,
That how I feel when stressed,
I need me some pills,
I hate being depressed.
I take one,
I take two,
Next few hours,
Someone finds me looking blue.
He checks my pulse,
He gives a sigh,
Sad to know,
I let myself die.

 

[dirtymind21]

wow that is good. i like that.

 

[Krystal]

DAMN LIL MA! 🙁

Once again you amaze me! Awesome writing! 😉

 

[Nyasia]

OUR LITTLE GIRL IS GROWING UP GRANDPA JOE!.LOL

NICE CRYSTAL😉

 

[parejas]

Hey Crystal that's really good girl.

Liz

 

[Taz X.T.R.]

Damn BabyVamp, lol.
Very good use of rhyming.


Fear not, it is only the body that dies......................

 

[Crystal2001]

Thanks guys..Damn you have no idea how stressed I was when writing this poem down..lol..I dont even know how I ended up ending it like that!

 

[NESSAVA]

Wow Crys I love this poem, awesome 😀

 

[Martini]

love it. i can feel the beat too.

 

[Crystal2001]

Oh shit..Naya??..did ya just say grandpa joe??..LOL!!!!!..😛

Tini and Nessa..thanks..😀

 

[FantasyGerl]

good 1 mamita

 

[Crystal2001]

Thanks mama..😀