Hurtful Goodbye

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Sitting on the dinner table,
Hateful words being exchanged,
Little did they know,
There life was being rearranged.

So many lies,
Had finally been revealed,
She wanted to sit and die,
Theres only so much u can deal.

He told her things,
She never thought she'd hear,
She wanted to run and hide,
But she had nothing to fear.

She still has a full life ahead of her,
No need for a man that cheats,
So many good men out there,
All she needs to do is get off her feet.

She got off the table,
And told him to get the hell out of her life,
She doesnt need a man whos been lying to her,
She doesnt need to be his wife.

As he walked out the door,
He knew he done her wrong,
He shouldnt have told her,
But this has been going on for too long.

So as he closes the door,
She whispers a Hurtful Goodbye,
She needs to live her life,
Why live it a lie?????
 
This was a wonderful treat, somewhere between ballad poetry and sonet, good verse crystal
 
Thank you...I know my poems seem kinda sad...But it is reality. Its an every day life for many people that I know. My poems are based on true stories..Enjoy guys
 
I HEAR YOU MAMA

DON'T WORRY ABOUT THEM BEING SAD, MOST OF MINES ARE SAD TO AND THEY ALSO COME FROM PERSONAL STRUGGLES SO JUST LET IT FLOW!!🙂
 
Damn..this poem always gets me sad..LOL..A lot of this is happening now...Thank you Destiny..Im digging this one back out too from waaayyy back then when I first posted it..
 
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