hot or not

[MARYSOL787]

got a fire deep down inside of me
control
doesnt pertain to me
hello lover
my deep brush under cover
would like to say hello to ya
even so
i know
whats lurking
murking
mocking me
fellow
stay awhile
you would wonder
who is my thunder
beating on my streets
writhing under my sheets
in my mind
i contrive
through my fingers
wrapped ribbons
turn to cinder
let love fly
creativity is my guy

 

[Nyasia]

Hey MARYSOL, your writing reminds me of my homegirl SEXYANGELS writing. nice flow to it. 😉

 

[DESTINY11]

True Nya, now that I re-read she does kinda remind me of Ang.. Keep em coming mama.🙂

 

[MARYSOL787]

i wrote this spontaneously must of been something in the air
thanks for the support
(vry lyrical vry spiritual):scatter

 

[Cheryl phillips]

NICE WRITIN MA..KEEP EM COMIN!!!

 

[myonlysweetie]

Nice flow, great writing! 😀

 

[MARYSOL787]

THANK YA! THANK YA!
I am reading a lot of the poems and lyrics its nice to share with people who have a love for it! :inlove with creativity

 

[Lamatrix]

oh shit fo sho mama you do sound like SexyAngel. good work! keep them comin!

 

[MARYSOL787]

SEXYANGEL MY LONG LOST TWIN SEEK ME OUT SO WE CAN BEGAN
TWICE THE WORDPLAY NO MATTER WHAT THE WORDS SAY IF 1 PLUS 1 IS 2
DOUBLE THE CHANCES FOR LYRICAL ANTICS AND EUPHORIA WILL ENSUE
DISCLAIMER*(not sexual innuendo)Y'ALL SO DIRTY!:blah