" Goodbye "

Angelino

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I've reached that limit where i can nolonger take pain,
only to drown in a puddle of my own tears.
I've just about did everything in my power,
but lost due to my pains and fears.

Lastnight I stood outside looking straight at the moon,
as my tears fell from my face.
Thinking how something so good can end up so wrong,
but i guess my heart could never be apart in your place

I'm sad, angry and heart broken,
my emotions do all the talking for me.
I nolonger know what love is,
cuz you left me in a state where i can't even seem to be free.

I realized there's only one solution to my problem,
i know it's going to be a hard decision to make.
I've been through so much pain like a never ending road,
it's just to much to bear and even take.

I've tried to open up to the ones i love,
but all i got was a back turned.
I never realized how that wouldmake me feel,
it hurt so much as if i've been burned.

I'm saying goodbye to myself,
there's no more hope for me anymore.
i want this pain to end already,
i just want to let it all go

I point the object to my head,
and squeeze my eyes tight.
letting lose a silver bullet,
a bullet that ended my life.
 

Enigma

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Damn Angelino! That's deep!

btw I hoping you doing good these days Angelino been a while we crossed post paths. :cheers
 

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I had read this poem before and didn't comment....got a call from one of my friends at work who told me how hot this poem is....and I must agree...excellent writing Angelino.
 

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mzcrazybtch said:
excellent writing Angelino.
Definately. He writes flawlessly coming from the heart...that's another reason I admire so much his work...you can feel it.
 
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