"Give Me The Chance..."

[XPiMpiToX]

Hey Peoplez...this RJ the 17 yr old Mexican Freestyle FreAk..I was thinkin' about my continous situation with girls..and well i thought up of a lil sumthin i call Give Me The Chance. its still being worked on...my first song ever written and me loving freestyle so much it had 2 be about heartbreak...

"Give Me The Chance"
Written By: Raul Martinez Jr.
(c)2001 Raul Martinez Jr.

Verse 1:
Everytime that I think of you
I just can't understand how we can't be
I can't understand how my love for you will go to waste
Simply because you will not give me the chance...

Chorus:
Give me the chance to show you the many ways of love
I got for you
Give me the chance to prove
that I will be there for you
ohh girl just give me the chance
and I will be yours forever...

Verse 2:
Do you feel my presence...
Its the presence of the amor que tengo por ti
todo mi amor sera para ti
don't believe it when they say im not worth the time
cuz girl all i want is for you to be mine...
Chorus...

Thats all i got...not so good methinks but it sticks out 2 me cuz well...i write what i feel...comments complaints...lawsuits whatever i can take it...xpimpitox@aol.com
adios mi freestyle peepz

 

[Rhoq]

Raul...

Don't be so hard on yourself, bro...I like your lyrics a lot. The fact you are writing from your heart, makes them that much more powerful. Great first effort - keep it up.