Foster Child

[Dave G>]

I wrote my life on a ripped page and took it to a stage,
I wanted the gage, but I was locked in a cage.
They made me talk to make me cry,
I wish that first tear never left my eye.
I balled my fist when I had to reminisce,
I started to miss, mann, I never felt this.
I felt alone, I had more than one home,
And now your gonna tell me you don't like my tone.
Times are tough will I ever see enough,
People love, people lust, I don't know who to trust.
Can you blame me now, callin me a problem child,
Christmas time you can barely get a smile.
A different home every year, where do I go from here?
I'll pack the garbadge bags, I'll probibly come back here.
Donated gifts for intention of up lift,
I'm sounding ungreatful? That's because I been done this.

Dave G.

 

[atx]

DAVE, THAT'S SO SAD AND TOUCHING! GREAT POEM!

 

[Dave G>]

DAVE, THAT'S SO SAD AND TOUCHING! GREAT POEM!

Thank you! :hpound

 

[Liz_Torres]

is this something that u would consider completing as a song?

 

[crazygirl]

WOW
this really made me cry, cuz it made me think of my 4 lil babys, and how blessed i am and they r that we adopted them and they never had 2 go through this
thank u 4 sharing this poem with us

 

[Dave G>]

is this something that u would consider completing as a song?

LIZ, This is the first verse. I have the second verse which is about the child who goes the wrong route because of his situation. And the third verse that is about a child who was raped by his mother's boyfriend and can't trust any one.

 

[aim4night]

wow. thats is heartfelt

 

[SEDUCTIVE NENA]

wow. thats is heartfelt

Really is🙁

 

[myonlysweetie]

That was good but :sosad ... u go boy! Do your thang!

 

[Shorty3869]

awwww good poem!

 

[Crystal2001]

Damn dave..very nice.

 

[Dave G>]

Thanks! It's very personal.

 

[LaBettyBoop]

Powerful words Dave! ~thumbs up~ Loved it! 🙂

 

[DESTINY0806]

Dave I Have Chills Going Down My Spine, I Want To Thank You For Bringing Such Personal Thoughts Out For Us To Read. I Love It, I Think I'm Gonna Cry Now. 🙁

 

[Dave G>]

Thanks! This is not to feel sorry, but to understand and realize that when things seem so bad, there are children who are living a real tough life. And didn't ask for it! 😉

 

[LaBettyBoop]

Thanks! This is not to feel sorry, but to understand and realize that when things seem so bad, there are children who are living a real tough life. And didn't ask for it! 😉

That is sooo true.

 

[Jessicatx_lilone]

Man I know exactly what your feeling I done went through that too. Just keep speaking up for those who are afraid. Keep ya head up and you'll see another day. Remember that which doesn't kill us only makes us stronger. Good job.