Ever been scared......poetic of difference.

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dauphin HEY GUYS THIS IS JUST A LITTLE SOMETHING THAT I WROTE FROM HE HEART..... IF YOU WANT IT IS SORTA CALLED A DIFFERENCE OF A POEM,ABOUT THE TIMES IN MY LIFE THAT I AM SCARED OF SUCCESS .[AND AM I REALLY GOOD ENOUGH]!WELL HERE GOES A LITTLE STORY........

I'm alone in my own world.
[reasons,why unknowed to you!]
my life is missing a piece of hope[heart]......
i've escaped it once, still it gets worse.
i once considered myself ambitiuos, and optemistic.
scared to try, don't know why? scared to try don't know why ?
just can't hepl but to feel this way inside.
got so close ,yet felt so far....
i just wanted to touch the music in my life,
music ,music, music,i just can't denigh.
it's the only thing that keeps me on a natural high.
it's in my life,it's in my heart.
why i'm scared to increase the art in life?
just don't know!help me take on this action in life help me to beleve again,help me get this ticket out of this world,to the music life where i know i belong......help me make smiles on the faces of people who are long yearning to be happy.....
to make this music that pushes them to feel hope again.......all i want is love ........all i want is a chance......
but then there's that feeling again the feeling of being scared.
scared of not making it .
not being good enough.
not looking the way they want me too look.
just nervous,and heart broken.
i know it is there.
i know i have what it takes.
i know i can make it.
i know it takes sacrifice.
i know that, i know it hurts.
i know hard work.
i know life.
i know love.
iknow passion.
and i definetly know music.
for i'am the dream, everyone hopes to be,
everyone wants to breath....
just need to be unwrapped and unleashed.........just want this music.to touch people to be alive........ just want to be me.
and this is the end of my dream...
and the start of my actions.........
the life
the love
the death
the earth
the ground
the tears
the pride
the touch
it's music
that keeps us going
it keeps us living
it keeps us loving
it keeps us laughing
it's the music
THE NATURAL HIGH IN EVERYONE'S LIVES...
THANK YOU FOR TAKING TIME OUT TO READ THIS POEM......
I HOPE IT TOUCHES YOU IN SOME WAY....THIS IS THE ART OF IT ALL.....RIGHT
THE EXPRESSION OF MUSIC.
 
THANK YOU....IT'S LIKE YOU SAID...TRUE POETS DON'T RIGHT THERE THOUGHTS WITH A PEN....THEY RELEASE THE INK THAT FLOWS FROM WITHIN THEIR HEART......THANKS MA I LIKE YOUR WORK TOOO...IT'S DEEPER THEN DEEP.
 
You can do it. I just Write how I feel ."Never thinking about the consequences or waht people might say." I just go with my Feelings. sometimes i might say what was i thinking. or wow was that me. or i need to improve on my writing .but i know THAt out there in the world there is always gonna be someone who can relate . UNDERstand it. or just like it.THANKS. and your poems seem very open too.ALWAYS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN>
 
musiclady2424 said:
You can do it. I just Write how I feel ."Never thinking about the consequences or waht people might say." I just go with my Feelings. sometimes i might say what was i thinking. or wow was that me. or i need to improve on my writing .but i know THAt out there in the world there is always gonna be someone who can relate . UNDERstand it. or just like it.THANKS. and your poems seem very open too.ALWAYS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN>
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TRUE...YEAH WHEN I WRITE I THINK OF HOW A PERSON MIGHT FEEL WHEN THIS OR THAT HAPPENS TO THEM...PUT MYSELF IN THEIR SHOES...THEIR SITUATIONS. BUT EVERYTIME YOU GIVE MY POEMS A COMMIT I ALWAYS GET HAPPY AND FEEL THAT IT IS GOOD....BECAUSE LIKE I SAID I LOVE YOUR WRITTING!
 
awww that's sweet. lol well yeah girl i love your writing as well. there honest feelings and truth is in them too. so i'm always reading them when i get a chance to get online.thanks alot. i appreciate it.
 
musiclady2424 said:
awww that's sweet. lol well yeah girl i love your writing as well. there honest feelings and truth is in them too. so i'm always reading them when i get a chance to get online.thanks alot. i appreciate it.
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:boing YOUR WELCOME! I THINK LATER I AM GOING TO GO THROUGH AND CHECK OUT SOME MORE OF YOUR POEMS.
 
ok. i dont have that many but thanks.and enjoy. most of them are on other poem sites too. i need to go look .i forgot which i think it's on my favorites. but ok enjoy.
 
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