I little critique, on the vocal. Try using less reverb. It sounds a little overprocessed. Its hard to understand some of the vocal. If it were played in a club, the vocal will be lost because the natural reverb of a big room.
NO OFFENCE taken, actually these were my first productions experimenting with diffrent type of studio equiptment LOL. All these songs are being re produce and master. Thanks for your advice. dengel-wik-it records