*luv2_freestyle*
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hey, i just joined this site about 2 minutes ago, and im only 15, but i wanna know what everyone thinks of this one, just wrote it
ive backed off, even if it hasn't been for that long, its just being without you feels so wrong, so i hope youre ready for this... because these words are gonna be strong, you gotta choose, now or never, but i hope you choose now because bein with you is so much better, thats why im writin you this letter, i want you to know i feel like i could be with you forever, you make me feel like i could sky dive, without a parachute, hit the ground.... and be fine, you make me feel so alive, like i can't die, and you know that i won't lie to you, girl you know i won't even try to, and everytime i kiss your face, its so sweet... the taste, and you always got such a beautiful look on your face, i wish we could always walk the same pace, youve always been the one to make my heart race, theres not a second ive spent with you that i feel is a waste, i want you back for today, tomorrow... and everyday, im lettin you know ill give it one more try, thats all itll take, but forever or never, thats the choice you gotta make
so what do you think? i know its short, but i just wrote it in about 5 minutes
ive backed off, even if it hasn't been for that long, its just being without you feels so wrong, so i hope youre ready for this... because these words are gonna be strong, you gotta choose, now or never, but i hope you choose now because bein with you is so much better, thats why im writin you this letter, i want you to know i feel like i could be with you forever, you make me feel like i could sky dive, without a parachute, hit the ground.... and be fine, you make me feel so alive, like i can't die, and you know that i won't lie to you, girl you know i won't even try to, and everytime i kiss your face, its so sweet... the taste, and you always got such a beautiful look on your face, i wish we could always walk the same pace, youve always been the one to make my heart race, theres not a second ive spent with you that i feel is a waste, i want you back for today, tomorrow... and everyday, im lettin you know ill give it one more try, thats all itll take, but forever or never, thats the choice you gotta make
so what do you think? i know its short, but i just wrote it in about 5 minutes
