another lil poem about my dad. never take those you love for granted.lifes not 4 ever

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'People that know us say'
i'm a clown .
i get it from my dad.
people say i have a beautiful smile,
i get it from my dad'
People say i'm always helping out my loves one to much,
i get it from my dad.
people say i party to much,i get it from my dad'
i guess i'm just to kind hearted like my dad...
people say that there are great talents in me'you know '
i get it from my dad '
that is because my dad passed on his genes to me'
my dad is a beautiful person inside and out'
not every one could see the ways god has let me see.
so thankful i am here today for his god given seeds,
has blessed me.
you see him now ,you see his frown,
you see him now,you see him down,
you see him now,he seizes and falls,
can't controll what got him down.'you see him now,you see him down on the ground.
pitch black :it's all quiet now to him,he can't hear a sound, no sound:just a few minutes go by and the ambulance is called....in and out the hospital he goes,:dayum all in one month.he can barely stand strong any more his life span is short:....Doctor says he's lucky if he makes it past this year..but another thing my dad is and hass passed on to me his next of kin...is that we are fighters ..survivors..and my daddy is fighting to live.but .my dad has been fighting for his life al these years.
and when life finally loved him,
when all around him changed,when all he could never understand or make sence of before it happend,when all in his world turned beautiful{shit}when he wanted to breath clean air.he started to get sick.and could not handle it,but who can handle being sick.!?
i never knew my dad was so sick
that his life was slowly leaving him.
until i let him live with me.
until i cared for him and saw what he went threw each day.\ \
when all else fails us
he was their ,and i cryed,because he cared.and i was mean at time cause i though he was heartless but he loves me still,and he continues to fight to live to spend time with his four grandchildren.have you looked at you r life !the life you live,!have you taken it serious.is there someone that you have loved but taken for granted. this is just a lil story about his mife and mine.it's happening right now as we speak. no matter how upset you are still love someone.even if they neglected you.cause if that was you dying is that how you would want to feel .alone with noone visiting you .or at your bed side. i know i don't and i realized a lot of reality slapped me in my face .this is of my poetry poems story. thanks for taking time to read it.i love club freestyle. they allow you to express your self all the time.
 

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i also wanted to say rest in peace ,to my grandmother in law who died yesterday in puerto rico. i'll have some good poetry about her later ,for now i'm going to sleep.to rember all the good things and memmories she left with us.
 

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Gosh Music Lady... For you have touched my heart, and tugged at its strings. Thank you for sharing with us.. Beautiful, and oh so true.. Really makes you think... Thank you
 

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JohnFly5 said:
Gosh Music Lady... For you have touched my heart, and tugged at its strings. Thank you for sharing with us.. Beautiful, and oh so true.. Really makes you think... Thank you
thank you. i cryed as i wrote it. i'm glad you felt it in your heart.
 

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Music you are a wonderful poet....and you fill my eyes up with tears with this poem as well...I am so sry to hear about your father...Having you as a daughter is a blessing because you are standing beside him fighting for his will to live....I respect you for that music and i hope i can write beautiful poetry such as yourself.....I will keep you and your family in my prayers...We will keep our head up to together....I give you much love for sharing this with us
 

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Wow, That was a very touching poem . My heart goes out to you.
 

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thank you so very much.dove angel and everyone elsetoo for taking time to read ....
 

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Veryyyyyyyy Niceee N Touching...best Wordds Ive Seen From U...god Bless U N Da Fam
 

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thank you eze 2k3 i just had to get that out .much love .i have not seen y ou on in such a long time wow. nice to see you again.take care thanks for replying.
 

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Hey music lady im sorry for your loss. my thoughts and prayers go to you and the family. Keep the poetry coming and stay up..
 

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Very beautiful and touching, I know how you feel. I lost my Pops it'll be 2 years the 12th of November, and my father-in-law-just past on the 12th of this month in P.R. as well....its so hard but we gotta be strong. I'm sorry to hear about your recent loss, "Que DIOS te bendiga a ti a tu familia".

musiclady2424 said:
'People that know us say'
i'm a clown .
i get it from my dad.
people say i have a beautiful smile,
i get it from my dad'
People say i'm always helping out my loves one to much,
i get it from my dad.
people say i party to much,i get it from my dad'
i guess i'm just to kind hearted like my dad...
people say that there are great talents in me'you know '
i get it from my dad '
that is because my dad passed on his genes to me'
my dad is a beautiful person inside and out'
not every one could see the ways god has let me see.
so thankful i am here today for his god given seeds,
has blessed me.
you see him now ,you see his frown,
you see him now,you see him down,
you see him now,he seizes and falls,
can't controll what got him down.'you see him now,you see him down on the ground.
pitch black :it's all quiet now to him,he can't hear a sound, no sound:just a few minutes go by and the ambulance is called....in and out the hospital he goes,:dayum all in one month.he can barely stand strong any more his life span is short:....Doctor says he's lucky if he makes it past this year..but another thing my dad is and hass passed on to me his next of kin...is that we are fighters ..survivors..and my daddy is fighting to live.but .my dad has been fighting for his life al these years.
and when life finally loved him,
when all around him changed,when all he could never understand or make sence of before it happend,when all in his world turned beautiful{shit}when he wanted to breath clean air.he started to get sick.and could not handle it,but who can handle being sick.!?
i never knew my dad was so sick
that his life was slowly leaving him.
until i let him live with me.
until i cared for him and saw what he went threw each day.\ \
when all else fails us
he was their ,and i cryed,because he cared.and i was mean at time cause i though he was heartless but he loves me still,and he continues to fight to live to spend time with his four grandchildren.have you looked at you r life !the life you live,!have you taken it serious.is there someone that you have loved but taken for granted. this is just a lil story about his mife and mine.it's happening right now as we speak. no matter how upset you are still love someone.even if they neglected you.cause if that was you dying is that how you would want to feel .alone with noone visiting you .or at your bed side. i know i don't and i realized a lot of reality slapped me in my face .this is of my poetry poems story. thanks for taking time to read it.i love club freestyle. they allow you to express your self all the time.
 
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