Angels in Dreams, Forgive me.......... (Not for the weak)

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Sometimes, in this dark place we call our dreams, you see a face. Is it an angel, a herald?

"Can I ask your name?"

No response. She just stares at you with the smile from the heavens. She dances in the light, her hair gently flows with her movements.

You are taken to a carnival, long ago in the old times. Where Knights existed, Kings ruled, and the arguements were settled by swords made of mythic metal.

But she danced........

So beautiful was she, so innocent. Her hair golden like wheat. Her eyes blue like the clear sky, oh you love her. You desire approval, her touch.

But she dances, un aware of your feelings for her.

You run after her, holding a red rose. You run through the crowd of joyous people, dancing with her.

"Please, Please I must tell you something." you say to her.

She stops dancing, you get on bended knee.

"Please take this rose, a symbol of my love."

She takes the rose, but she is confused. Scared, afraid if what you are about to say.

"I love you, I honestly love you."

Her eyes open with Fright. you are confused, but you continue to say.

"I LOVE YOU, I REALLY LOVE YOU."

Then, the music stops, the crowd comes to a silence. The sky turns grey and the clouds fill them. Lighting and thunder begin to strike. Then out of nowhere a Black Knight appears on a dark stallion. he gallops closer, closer to her. Then the knight reaches down, grabs her, rams his fist into her chest, and rips out her heart. the knight then turns around and swallows the heart whole.

You can't move, you scream but no one hears you. You tremble in what is beyond fear now.

The knight dis-mounts and stands before you. The Knight grabs you, rips open your shirt. Then you say..

"PLEASE, PLEASE, I DID IT FOR LOVE.."

The Knight just looks at you, then it steps back, removes it's dark mask and reveals its true face.

It's her.

Her golden brown hair, her sky blue eyes.

She comes to your ear and whispers..

"Pain is love."

And she drives her hand into your chest, the pain so immense that you, you

You awake screaming, drenched in sweat. Trembling in your room. You breathe.

You breathe.

It Was just a dream. You get up, slip on your scandals and head to the wash room.

You splash cold water on your face. Then you head back to your bed, but as you get ready to lie back down you see a Red Rose lying on the floor with a note.

You open the note to see a remark written in blood.

Pain is Love

You can't move, you tremble in what is beyond fear. You yell, but no one hears your screams..........

My Mortal Half laughs..........
 
Wow!

This was beautiful! In my mind, I could see everything that was going on. Like a scene from a movie. Wow, this poem was excellent. I really loved it and it's true. Love is Pain because that's what you feel the most when your in love. The pain when things don't go how you wish or expect. When that person doesn't call or does the things they use too when they wanted to conquer your heart. I agree, Love is PAIN as PAIN is Love!!
 
OMG THAT WAS BEAUITFUL!!!!! True LOVE can Be Pain but it can also bring you SUCH JOY AND HAPPINESS that sometimes its worth the PAIN!

LOVE IS A BEAUTIFUL THING
 
Demmit! I missed this one!

I'll agree with Fernanda and say that as I was reading this I could see it happening in my mind!

Awesome Job! :yeey
 
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