A not so Delicious Life

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By Nyasia A. Rivera Age 8

A poem by my little girl..Blew me away, she said I could share.

Some say she loved it others maybe
She thought Ice Cream was just flavored ice
and candy just a big blob of sugar
Things arent easy like they seem to be
You will have good days but most bad.
Everyday is not the same
You will get hurt and get back up.
Thats just the way life is!
Nothing is easy or perfect
No One is perfect
No matter How hard U try
Hair will get messy and bad things will happen too
You cant always be Happy or get your way
So try as hard as you can
Nothing will happen the way you plan
You may have freinds who are enimies
but get along and play
Things in life can be precious or decitful in one day
and you dont even notice
Parents get divorced and fight
but still things can get right
thats the way life is.

I did not change a word
Deliza
 

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Dam my little Nya, Mami this is a beatiful Poem baby, I love it. that poem hit me right in my heart. oh my god. I love it. Deliza i want a copy of it. so I could save it and read it over and over when I feel down. Nyasia mami God Bless you my baby
 

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Well Tell Her That I Said To Continue To Write And Express Herself In This Way. I Love To See Stuff Liek This Coming From Our Young Ones. Gives Me A Lil Hope For The Future.

:)
 

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if u test delizas blood and her daughters , u will see they do not match..that girl is of a supernatural being!!!!! very talented ma...bless her
 

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LOL @ Pete

Deliza...tell your daughter she's very talented and thank you for allowing us to read this. :)
 

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Krystal said:
LOL @ Pete

Deliza...tell your daughter she's very talented and thank you for allowing us to read this. :)

Thanks Krystal. She has been writing alot for a while now. She recently had a poem published and has 2 books she has already had published...I am very proud to say the least.
 

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Sometimes God uses the things you least expect to inspire you and as a learning tool. Little Nyasia I must say is one of them. She is an amazing talent. God bless you and keep up the great work. I know you will do big things. Don't forget the little people like me LOL.

Manny
 

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clubfossil said:
What a wonderful and talented young lady...may she continue to write poetry..god bless her.. :)

Hell yeah Freddie and you should here here freestyle beats she is recording on the computer they will blow you a way. She is a an amazing gifted child and im proud to be her uncle.

:sbounce
 
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