A Moms Distress

[Crystal2001]

I watched my surroundings, from the very start, and now I see two lovers, slowly fading a part. I used to see him happy, I used to see her smile, now they are together, but in reality, it feels like a mile.

She believes he's with another girl, because she watches her surroundings just like me, shes right when she says "what goes around comes around", I think she should do something about it instead of letting it be.

I know it may seem like im dissapointed in her actions, but deep down inside I know that whatever she decides to do is right. Id rather see her happy, then to see another fight.

Things dont make any sense to you, till you look at reality, all I know is that when my mom is smiling, that is all that makes me happy....🙂

 

[Enigma]

Crystal....Awwwwwwwwww!!!

That was too touching!!! Nice!

-Antonio Martinez

 

[Crystal2001]

Thank you Antonio..::sniff sniff::..this poem hits my emotional side...LOL

 

[Enigma]

Trust me baby I know. 🙁

xoxox

~ant

 

[brenda]

Ahh..ma that was very heartfelt! This one hit home..even brought back memories!Sniff..Sniff.. I 'm with you!😉

 

[Crystal2001]

Awww brenda...I dont like to hit home with other people..gets them emotional too!..LOL..I nub you girl!

 

[mike4949]

Girl how do you come up with this great stuff!?

Mike😀

 

[brenda]

Awww brenda...I dont like to hit home with other people..gets them emotional too!..LOL..I nub you girl!

THATS OKAY NENA..I NUB YA BACK..MUAHZ!MUAHZ!MUAHZ!😀

 

[MIDNIGHTeternal]

that was really good... much propz

 

[Enigma]

(Man this poem made my jaw drop. She knows what I'm talking about.)

 

[Crystal2001]

Hey ant, when I was done with this poem, my mouth even dropped! I mean, I was in the moment (you know what im talking about) and I just wrote it down on paper.

Mike, how do I come up with these poems? Some of them, I dont just come up with, they are based on what has happened in my 13 years..LOL! I was gonna say LIFE, but I havent had much of one just yet. But anyhows, ones that talk about other subjects, even if I didnt go through it, it may be about someone I know..Or maybe im just writing it, because I know a lot of people have been through it themselves. But nowadays, I have been writing my poems based on me. A lot is happening at once for me, and sometimes I dont know how to express myself..Thats where the poems come into place...Im thinking about making a book one day, filled with poems..lol...I think i might be able to become a excellent writer if I keep it up!..😀

Brenda- Whats up girl? Thanks a bunch, your such an understanding lady!...lol..MUA!

 

[Enigma]

Originally posted by Crystal2001

Hey ant, when I was done with this poem, my mouth even dropped! I mean, I was in the moment (you know what im talking about) and I just wrote it down on paper.

Awwww!!! Cutie! Good work babes.

Im thinking about making a book one day, filled with poems..lol...I think i might be able to become a excellent writer if I keep it up!..😀

I can relate. I thought about doing the same thing. 😀 We're good writers!

-Antonio

 

[Crystal2001]

We are both GREAT writers, and even both CONCEITED!...lmao!!! Although, I am NOT, people just SAY I am..Right Enigma?..lol!

 

[mike4949]

Cool to be all that!!!! I feel I'm a great DJ!!!


Mike😀

 

[Enigma]

Originally posted by Crystal2001

We are both GREAT writers, and even both CONCEITED!...lmao!!! Although, I am NOT, people just SAY I am..Right Enigma?..lol!

Oh how we relate little boo bee. 😀

Damn.

Mike

I feel like Im a papi chulo and girls adore me and I AM! 😀

-Antonio

 

[Crystal2001]

OMG! Enigmaaaaaaaaa...lmao!

Yeah, hes actually right...All girls adore your booty! Especialy me..I nub you man!

Mike..I wanna hear you DJ..lol

 

[freestylevet]

WOW, Crystal2001

WOW Girley, that touched my heart...snif, snif. I have friends that have been there.

Times are tough, especially during the holidays when things like this happen to other peeps, you just hope and pray for the best to come soon to them.

Take care, and keep writing,,you ARE TALENTED BOOBI!!!!!

 

[Enigma]

Originally posted by Crystal2001

Mike..I wanna hear you DJ..lol

Oh, Im sure you would like that. 🙄

~Ant 😀

 

[Crystal2001]

OMG Enigma......(silence).....Im staring at you rolling your eyes at me...I feel hurt...LOL!!!..Listen bub, if you were to say im good at djing, I would have said I want to see you DJ too..But do you DJ? NO..So take them eyes, and play hoops with it!..lmao!!

Mike..Im sure you didnt take me saying that as if I was flirting with you..It was just a comment dude!...😀

FreestyleVet...Thank you for all the kind words you have said to me..I appreciate it girl..🙂

 

[mike4949]

You the best. Thanks for the comment miss piggy(since everybody now call you little one!). I'm a good DJ, just need some new equiptment!!

Mike😀