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I grew up with a void in my heart
Never knowing that we were torn apart
I wonder if the flowers were in bloom
I wonder if the skies were gray and gloom
How can someone committ such an awful crime?
Not even knowing that at the time
It should've been a glorious day
As you prepared for my birthday....

I was raised well and was never without
While in my mind I had many doubts
Why at night as I lay down to sleep
I've felt the void and a pain so deep?
Who would do such a horrible thing?
And when I found out I was only sixteen...

I know now as you look down at me
You are proud of the woman I came to be
I will walk each day with my head held high
With the knowledge that you are by my side
So as the years go by I will not be blue
Only because I am the spitting image of you.
 
WOW.

Wow nina that was beautiful!!! 🙂 God bless sweety.

~Antonio
 
Wow nina I can't stress how super emotional that was for me to read. Wow!! 🙂

~Anotonio
 
TRUST ME..I HAD TO COMPOSE MYSELF WRITING IT..AND THEN I HAD TO WRITE IT AGAIN BECAUSE I FELT I SHOULD SHARE IT WITH EVERYONE.
 
Thanks for sharing my beautiful friend. 🙂

~Antonio
 
THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL MA..HEARTFELT! THANKS FOR SHARING W/US SWEETY! 🙂
 
Oh damn...Nina...That was so beautiful. It was actually more than beautiful. I feel you in this sweety....wow...I think im about to cry, even though I know you told me not to, but this is beautiful, and so true man. By the way you expressed yourself, this means that this poem really means something to you right?..🙂
 
YES IT DOES...IT'S THE LOSS OF MY MOTHER AND MY FEELINGS TOWARDS THE WHOLE SITUATION...IT'S A REAL SAD ONE.

I LOST HER AND NEVER GOT THE CHANCE TO KNOW HER. IT'S A DIFFICULT AND DEEP SITUATION THAT SOME PEOPLE MIGHT IDENTIFY WITH.
 
Nina...I am so sorry for your loss. I know what happened, and I am so sorry. Im sure when she looks down from up above, shes proud of the wonderful woman you came to be, the wonderful mommy that are as well..🙂
 
DAMN.. I CAME BACK TO READ THIS...ITS SO MOVING I:hearton IT!
 
I WOULD LIKE TO THANK EVERYONE FOR THE FEED BACK THAT I RECEIVED ON THIS POEM...YOU GUYS INSPIRED ME TO ENTER IT IN A CONTEST AND I RECIEVED A LETTER ON IT FOR PUBLICATION...AS PERSONAL AS IT IS TO ME I WAS VERY GLAD TO SHARE IT WITH EVERYONE.
 
mzcrazybtch said:
I WOULD LIKE TO THANK EVERYONE FOR THE FEED BACK THAT I RECEIVED ON THIS POEM...YOU GUYS INSPIRED ME TO ENTER IT IN A CONTEST AND I RECIEVED A LETTER ON IT FOR PUBLICATION...AS PERSONAL AS IT IS TO ME I WAS VERY GLAD TO SHARE IT WITH EVERYONE.
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CONGRATULATIONS...WELL DONE...YOU GO GIRLLLLLL!!!!

Nina; may I call you that?

I read it 2 times. IT HIT IN MY HEART. I too got teary eye and very emotional. I am so very sorry for your pain. Thank U-4 sharing this precious, private moment with strangers,,yet we are a family here..atleast I like to think so.

It's great that you've taken that step. I'm sure your MOM is watching and guiding you from the heavens sweetie.

Please, Please continue to share your thoughts from the heart with us. WE ARE ONE BIG POETIC FAMILY IN HERE..right guys?

BESITOS 4 YOU,
Lou-Lou
 
YES ALL WHO KNOW ME CALL ME NINA...AND YES I CONSIDER EVERYONE HERE LIKE MY FAMILY BECAUSE IT'S WHERE I CAN FIND LOTS OF LAUGHS, SOLACE, AND EVEN ADVICE SOMETIMES. IT'S A SHAME WE DON'T ALL LIVE IN THE SAME NEIGHBORHOOD.
 
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