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Old 11-12-2005, 09:25 PM
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Advice to A Friend

i just don't understand your reasons why
no matter how you explain it, you're not justified
he only has eyes for you
yet knowing this doesn't stop you from being cruel
you play with his heart as if it were a toy
making him cry brings you so much joy
the promises you make you always break
you promise him you'll change, but it's always the same
why don't you open your eyes
do you prefer to live a life of lies
don't you remember you prayed for his love
did you forget your cries to the Lord above
he truly loves you and is quite willing
he only wants to fulfill your needs
abusing his sincerity will be your fall
before you know he'll be getting my call
it won't be long before i take your place
i'll have no qualms in extending my stay
i've seen what he's been through because of you
he's getting tired of being your fool
a good man like him is truly hard to find
it isn't easy to find a man who for you will change his life
don't sleep and rely on your cruel games
when you've lost him, you'll only have yourself to blame
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Old 11-13-2005, 12:04 AM
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Old 11-13-2005, 08:09 AM
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thank u mamasitasssssss!!!!
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Old 12-06-2005, 07:23 PM
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ouch, girl...that was deep.
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Old 12-06-2005, 08:15 PM
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Myriam, that was hot. Truly from the heart.

I meet all kinds of girls on a daily basis. I see how they are and you'd be surprise to see that women do their fair share of damage and heartbreak in a relationship. Meeting them helps me to tell the real from the fake and I help other guys with honest hearts just looking for romance to know what to look for in a girl.
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Old 12-06-2005, 09:52 PM
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thank u so much for your thoughts. i love reading what you post...keep them coming. ur right, it's not just men who hurt women, it also happens the other way around. i also post what's in my heart and what i've witnessed. again, thanx for your thoughts.
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Old 12-07-2005, 07:30 AM
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Your welcome. Thank you also.
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Old 12-09-2005, 02:36 PM
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Hey you....that was great....keep em coming Myriam....you rock....
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Old 12-10-2005, 02:21 PM
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thank you my stranger.....thanx for ur words!!!
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