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Freestyle Forum: Slowly Fading Away...
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Old 10-20-2001, 06:21 PM
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Slowly Fading Away...

I looked at a cloud,
On a clear sunny day,
Imagining your face,
As the cloud faded away.

I turned to my friend,
Who had a question in her eye,
I didnt know what to say,
So I just sat there and cried.

Soon after that,
I decided to speak,
To tell her what I just realized,
And what had gotten me so weak....

" I looked at a cloud, on this clear sunny day, I saw his face, but then the clouds slowly faded away....(Took a deep breath)...
And then I realized, that it wasnt the cloud that faded above,
It was he, who faded away, along with my love....."
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Old 10-21-2001, 12:13 AM
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Cool

Awwwww cutie.

Nice writing!

-Anthony
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Old 10-21-2001, 11:09 AM
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Thank you...This poem actually did happen to me..Boy did I make a scene on my bus!!!!!!!!!!!!...lmao!!!
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Old 05-30-2010, 09:46 PM
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w0w that was very nice!!!

Quite worth coming ashore for that


I couldnt ever write something anywhere near as good!
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