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Old 01-26-2005, 12:07 AM
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Awesome Chuck! It's good to read your well written stuff again! Now all we need is some more writing from peeps(even the writers from before) and we can really have some fun! COOL!!!!

p.s. Chuck did you get my pm?
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Old 02-20-2005, 11:27 PM
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In an office room a man who has been training the new governments special super team is sitting down and not feeling too well. He is getting dizzy and is sweating profusely. ”What is happening to me? My mind.. getting… hard to.. to.. think. Memories slipping away.. my.. girls? He falls to the floor and then suddenly the lights are down and security alarms are blaring and a security camera is showing a special high- tech restraining chair that is empty. In the darkened office room a shadowed figure stands over the dizzy man. The shadowed figure is holding guns with red laser targeting shining them on the ill man.
The ill man looks different as if his features are melting and changing to another’s features. “I’m Xman..I’m X…I’m X….” The shadowed figure’s eye’s then glow and fangs are bared “No you are not you son of a bitch, I am Xman. You were used to mimic me and my skills and memories to train these flunkies because I refused. I am no ones property! Say good by @$$hole!” The real Xman pulls the triggers to his gun and fires a few rounds into the pretender. He then hears some guards running towards the office.
“I gotta find my girls.” He then takes off silently through the ventilation system.


Elsewhere Onji, Milagro and Antonio are almost at the location of the large creature that has appeared. In another part of the city fifty people are in a street corner dancing around madly and vandalizing small stores and above them on top of a building a being from another dimension laughs at the lunatics in the street and his name is Loki god of mischief and evil.
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Old 02-25-2005, 08:57 PM
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Old 03-23-2005, 06:00 PM
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Daniella arrives at Club Chosen and is tired and a bit overwhelmed about seeing her dad again after so long after she thought he was dead. It was wonderful and shocking. She just needs some time as well as her father does. He is waking up to a different world and not all his friends are around and when he is more coherent and stable he will have to deal with Javiar’s coma and that will cause new emotional anguish. Daniella drove all the way down with the radio off. If she had the radio on she would have found out about the giant creature that appeared and her friends that are trying to subdue it. She was lost in her thoughts and its any wonder how she made it to Club Chosen in the first place.

She is in the bar area and made her way to the elevator. The guard on shift is Manny Humberto Ramos who likes to go by the name Big Manny. He is six foot four and 235 lbs. He is one of the main guards/ bouncers at the club. “Hey boss lady.” He says to Daniella. “Hey Big Manny things cool here? Any mail?” “Things are under control. There was a fight earlier but it was handled. Here’s your mail and a package.” “okay thanks Manny.” Daniella responds. “Your welcome.” He says and Daniella punches in her code and enters the elevator. Soon she is upstairs and makes her way to her office and suite area. Just before opening the door with her keys she drops the package and picks it up and notices the name Andrew on it. “There’s no Andrew who lives here?? Stupid people! No return address either?” She then uses her keys and begins to open the door. Andrew hears the door and grabs the Katana ready in case there is another imp or creature trying to attack.

Outside Club Chosen a car drives away and the driver is a man on a cell phone.
He speaks “The package has been delivered. Andrew should get the Holy light dagger as he is destined. He should then receive excellent combat training from these people.
All is going according to the prophesy so far.

Elsewhere Milagro and crew’s fight with giant creature is not going so well. But unexpected help is on the way.
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Old 03-23-2005, 06:32 PM
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Elsewhere in another world in another dimension a couple has survived quite a bit fighting off large strange wolves and giants made of living ice. Through their skills and special abilities they have managed to survive thus far. It was very close the last fight but they made it with a few scrapes and minor injuries. They are now resting in a cave before they make their way to the great city where they may be able to get some help. Who is this strange couple lost in another world? One of them has telekinetic abilities and the other is a Lycanthrope.

Taina: “Honey are you okay?”

Rico: ” I’ll be okay. My werewolf abilities seem to be a bit enhanced in the magical realm, as are your abilities.”

Taina: ”Yeah well you don’t have the local’s calling you a witch.”

Rico: “Yeah well the dark elves want my hide, literally! They wanted to use me as a fur coat!”

Taina: “Yeah well the Witch and the Werewolf is what they are calling us. Some see us as saviors while others see us as trouble.”

Rico: “Only the dark ones around here see us as trouble. Or maybe the simple folk.
We’ll be okay. I’m sure of it.”

Taina: “I hope so darling, I hope so. I really miss the kids and friends and the food at home.

Rico: “Yeah me too. I’m tired of always having to hunt for food. It was fun at first but now its getting old. We have no money that works here and well working here is hard too. Especially when your main focus is trying to get home.”

Taina: “Well let’s take breather and then we can start our journey again in a few hours.”

Rico: “Okay hon.”

They then set up a fire and bed to take a nap in each others arms.
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Old 03-23-2005, 06:54 PM
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Old 03-23-2005, 08:46 PM
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Elsewhere the evil God of mischief is enjoying the chaos that he has created. As he laughs at the humans he has enthralled he senses something. There is a faint energy that is getting stronger somewhere in the city. “I wonder if that is what I think it is? Could it be that which I am waiting for? Could it be my front row seat to some major chaotic entertainment? I can not wait!! I am overjoyed ha ha ha ha!!!!

Somewhere in the deepest most hidden part of the city a certain vault is counting down and the numbers are getting closer. Very soon Project Legacy will be unleashed. Only when it is unleashed will it be known because the vault is cloaked and protected by powerful magicks that will keep it hidden from the eyes of anyone with special abilities.
Many dark priests sacrificed their lives and souls to make sure these spells worked.

In another dimension Rico and Taina are awoken to some ruckus outside the cave.
Rico grabs a sword and throws a short sword to Taina. They get up and see a man and a woman battling three frost giants. Taina begins to exit the cave but Rico stops her.
“What are you doing? Let’s get out there!” Taina says. “No just look.” Rico responds.
The man has a goatee and a Viking like outfit and is wielding a hammer weapon. The woman is dressed in a black goth like outfit with a long flowing cloak and is firing purple flame like energy from her hands at a frost giant. The giants fight viciously and knock the man down towards the ground with a powerful devastating blow with an enormous club made of stone and ice. The man gets up from something he shouldn’t even get up from. He gathers his strength and unleashes a barrage of powerful punches that echo like thunder across the frozen landscape. The giants are knocked back and then the woman stuns the giants with multiple attacks of her purple energy. The giants are stunned and then the man grabs his weapon and yells out loud and unleashes bolt after bolt of lightning. The giants are so hurt that the fight is out of them already and they run for their frozen lives. The children of Ymir shall live to fight again another day.

The battle is over and the man and the woman walk towards Rico and Taina. Taina says to them “Are you okay?” The man responds “Oh that? That was fun!”
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Old 03-23-2005, 09:05 PM
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In another part of the city there is a hidden temple and there are people dressed in white robes and they seem to be very spiritual and with eastern and western influences. A man arrives and goes into a hallway that leads to stairs going into a hidden chamber. He walks through the chamber past some men wearing some sort of medieval chain mail armor and holding swords and practicing their fighting techniques. He then arrives into a room with monks and speaks. “It is true Andrew has the dagger. Now all we have to do is wait for him to get his skills and gather with the others to do battle.” A hooded monk lifts up his head and it is apparent that he is blind. He then says “The chain of events that will lead to that battle has already begun.The prophesy is unfolding as we speak.”

Milagro and Onji and her brother are outmatched by the creature. It is too powerful and its hide is very thick. The creature is breathing out bio electrical bolts and is destroying a lot around it. Suddenly a super fast woman is running around the beast and then a very large muscled man flies down from the sky and a glowing woman and the flying muscle man says to Milagro “Do you need some help?”
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Old 05-20-2005, 12:44 PM
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Well I guess I will write up some sort of ending and wrap up to this story and end it and have the heroes live happily ever after since there is no real interest. Well I guess it had it's good run and all things do come to an end. Take care and peace to all!

Besides there are other things coming that are much more fantastically important. You shall all see. :whistle :read :angel :king
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Old 09-19-2005, 08:31 PM
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Milagro,Onji and her brother Antonio and the strange super being’s are battling the large creature and the beast will not stop it’s destructive agenda. Then one of the super beings flies up to the creatures face and the creature opens its mouth and the man disappears into it’s mouth filled with long sharp teeth. Just when they thought he was done for the creature’s mouth begins to slowly open and the flying super human is holding the creature’s mouth open. He then flies out before the creature snaps its large mouth closed again and then reels his hand back and unleashes a devastating upper cut to the creature’s jaw. The creature then hurls backwards from the force of the powerful punch. It is dazed and before the creature gets its bearings another portal opens up and the heroes are wondering if another monster is coming to make their evening more difficult. As the portal opens four figures emerge from it. The creature then staggers it’s way up and as the super beings attempt another attack a strange flash of light from the sky engulfs the city and the super beings disappear as if they weren’t there. Then one of the figures from the portal that looks like some sort of Viking flies up and lightning emanates from a large hammer he is holding. He then hurls the hammer at the chest of the monster and it strikes the monster and electrocutes the beast and as the creature is falling another portal opens underneath it and it falls through. Just then one of the figure transforms into a purple fire bird and goes after the beast that fell through the portal as it closes. Milagro, Antonio and Onji are wondering who these strangers are and as the figures walk through the dark and into the light they see a hooded robed man and woman and then they take down their hoods and their faces are revealed and they are Taina and Rico. Onji is shocked and looks at Milagro and Antonio with a stunned look and Milagro say’s “Is that… is that….”
Onji tells her “Yes Milgro and Antonio that is your parents."
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Old 09-19-2005, 10:15 PM
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A reunion of family occurs and as tears of joy and overwhelming emotions run through their hearts and mind they begin their journey together to meet up with the others. Milgro looks to the large viking looking man and asks him “Are you Thor the God of thunder from Norse mythology?” He responds “No young lady I am not. I am a big fan of his though and modeled my garb and some of my power after him. I am a traveler of sorts and part of what I do is travel from dimension to dimension and observe and I also help when I can and to a certain degree as to not completely interfere with the fates of the beings I visit. My friend the uh… purple fire bird she went to make sure that creature went back to where it belongs. Speaking of belongs I have to leave to make sure that a certain individual goes where he belongs. Good bye my friends and safe journey and I have advice for you, Look with your hearts and remember that things aren’t always what they appear to be.” “What is your name? Who is the man that brought my parents back to me?” Milagro says “I am, called Enrik and I am friend.” A portal then opens and he waves his hand good bye and flies into the portal. Elsewhere in the city Loki is causing mischief and mayhem and truly enjoying it. He is now sitting on a makeshift throne on one of the levels of a tall building. “What a spectacular view of the chaos!” Loki says. Then suddenly behind him he senses the air ionizing and energy shifting and a portal opening and a figure is stepping through. He sees a hand holding a large hammer and Viking garb. “Oh great my stepbrother is here to ruin my fun!” He then sees the figure clearly and says “You are not my brother? Who are you??” It is Enrik and he responds “It’s time to go home to your dimension, your world, you’ve had enough fun Loki.” The trickster responds “Oh really who’s going to make me? You certainly cannot mortal pretender!” Loki gets up and then suddenly a shift in the air happens and Enrik is suddenly right next to Loki and says “Oh yes I can and you will go.” Enrik opens another portal and shoves Loki towards it and then he whistles and two large Ravens fly from the portal and begin pecking violently on Loki. They are the ravens of Odin and they contain some of his awesome power and they force Loki into the portal.
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Old 09-19-2005, 11:01 PM
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After the portal closes a large purple firebird appears and turns to human form and walks to Enrik. “I made sure that big ugly made it home. It should be of no problem anymore.” “That’s good.” Enrik replies. “Well I guess it’s time to go also because this reality won’t last long. We did as we were supposed to do and guide them to where they belong.” Yeah let’s go.” She responds. The two figures then disappear into yet another portal.
Meanwhile our heroes have gotten in touch with one another and will be meeting soon. There is a large storm coming and they are going to meet at the hospital. Elsewhere Xman, Hector and Andrew see the storm and know that there is something not right. The heroes eventually arrive at the hospital and notice the storm getting worse and worse and strange colored lightning is coming from the skies. They then reach the room where Carlos is and everyone is there. As they begin to hug one another a strange light fills the room and they all see images of all that has happened before and all their experiences in life from the worst moments to their best moments and that which they have missed and regretted and fantasy’s and adventures they wished and their hopes and dreams for their loved ones and friends. All of it is like a flood of images that hit them all at once and as the images and sensory input begins to calm down they feel a warm sensation of overwhelming love and joy fill their hearts. They see each other in their truest and purest essence and know that no matter what happens with the world and to them that they are family and they will do what ever it takes to preserve that and fight the good fight for the good of all. Taina and Rico then look to the kids and sense something is changing and begin to seem the kids fading. Taina begins to get upset and holds Milagro’s hands firmly to not let go and Milagro shout’s out “Mommyyyyyyy” and as Taina cries she then hears the cries of a baby and Milagro is in her arms and is a baby once more. Meanwhile Carlos hears a voice calling to him and the white light that was surrounding them begins to fade and become rooms that are quite familiar to them all. They all awaken to their beds and find that nothing has changed outside. All is as it was and they were dreaming. Each gets into a comfortable position and then talks to their respective love ones about their strange dream. When they all speak to each other eventually they will find that they were all dreaming the same dream. So was it really a dream? But before that happens they go back to their slumber and above them high in the sky the stars twinkle different colors and a man in the streets is looking up at the very same stars. A woman walks by the man and notices him looking up. “What are you looking at?” she says. “Oh me? Oh I am talking to my friends.” Um where? I just see stars? He responds “Um lady those aren’t stars trust me.” She then responds “Ah whatever you crazy man.” She then walks away. Elsewhere high above the homes of each of the chosen the stars twinkle and there are voices. The voices are coming from large ships enveloped in light. “They have passed the test. They should be able to handle the Legacy creature the last powerful wildcard of the dark. Meanwhile we must free the people of their secret enslavers and reunite all our brothers and sisters and grant them the truth and freedom they seek. The earth shall be free once again. Till then God bless the chosen for their hard work and selflessness and God bless the good people of earth.”

The End.
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Old 09-19-2005, 11:05 PM
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That's it folks I finished this story. No more, Finito,The end. They will all live happily ever after. Take care, peace and love to all.
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Old 09-21-2005, 03:40 PM
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Old 09-22-2005, 11:03 PM
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Thanks myonlysweetie and Brklyn345 um I think. Yeah well I had ideas to make this story big, but due to lack of interest and readers I cut it short and gave them a happy ending. Yeah there was some unresolved stuff but hey that is how life is sometimes. Well thanks again! I may start a very different story soon that alot of peeps can take part in and this story will be a bit more on the realistic side and like a tv drama. Well that's it for now. Take care God bless and peace to all!!!
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