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Old 07-12-2005, 06:42 PM
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my thoughts...

My eyes, they do deceive me
But my heart, it never lies
My mind refuses to see
But my heart's forever wise
My happiness, found in you
But my sadness never fades
I think that I can love too
Save for darkness, black as spades
I wonder, if you love me
If you'd prove it with a kiss
In shadows, where they can't see
Just one moment, lovers bliss
& I wonder as I write this
What you'll think, when it gets read
& I pray that you will find this
Before I shoot myself dead...
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Old 07-12-2005, 06:47 PM
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Niiiiiiiiicee!!! I like your writing!
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Old 07-12-2005, 06:53 PM
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ty & likewise
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Old 07-12-2005, 07:09 PM
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Nice writing just that ending makes me want to :splat
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Old 07-12-2005, 07:25 PM
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the ending makes you want to beat me with a fish? Leave my ex outta this
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Old 07-12-2005, 07:57 PM
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fishies hurt
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Old 07-12-2005, 07:58 PM
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Quote:
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the ending makes you want to beat me with a fish? Leave my ex outta this
Oh man thats just nasty.............. yuckie poo
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:02 PM
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well wtf biatch you started it!
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:06 PM
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All I was saying was that you needed to get splat for thinking of or never mind. Still yuckie poo.....
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:16 PM
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btw, nice poem.
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:21 PM
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Nicely done! Could have done without the last line though!
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Old 07-12-2005, 08:23 PM
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ty Chuckie & K-Jin

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Old 07-13-2005, 07:48 AM
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Old 07-14-2005, 08:50 PM
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what's with all this fish talk?

btw: great poem
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Old 07-15-2005, 10:13 AM
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