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Old 10-16-2005, 10:20 PM
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Insecured Girl

You have a long way to go.

You need a man to feel validated, terribly so.


You know this and yet to think about it hurts your mind.

Insecured girl, how could you be so blind??


Don't care to examine the man your with.

Just care to want what you lack, you give in to take a sip.


3 kids from 3 different dads.

Insecured girl, how could you be so bad??


When they tire, you try so hard to keep them with you.

Insecured girl, you claim me your enemy because I tell you the truth.


I see no remedy in this.

This is who you are and this is your "bliss".


If I were to give you one kiss, you would then listen.

But my kiss would still make your reality sicken.


"You are judging me."

In life, judges all of we.


You deny what is going on because the man makes your reality.

Wheres your dad??.....Out selling houses forgetting his family.


It's funny because I saw him in an article for being this wonderful guy.

In the picture, he was holding a kid that wasn't his own light.

He must've called the press on himself to tell these lies.

In the article, "Uni Casa" was advertised in some the lines.



So, insecured girl, how old are you??

Insecured girl, you must grow up because your kids need you too.
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Old 10-17-2005, 12:59 PM
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Wow that was soo GOOD ALMOST MADE ME CRY goo u
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Old 10-17-2005, 02:16 PM
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ALMOST MADE ME CRY goo u
Wow. Really?
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Old 10-28-2005, 03:00 PM
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my heart sends vibes to my brain,and releases it through my vains,lyrics unleashed through my hands,experience is written on paper through my pen.it's never planned.......it's no demand..it's my sign in life "that i'm alive.i write for soul, i make it my goal..
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Old 11-13-2005, 07:35 PM
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Thanks. Looking back on this poem, I made a few grammatical errors in leaving a few words out around the end but i'm glad you guys were able to overlook that. lol. Take care.
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Old 11-26-2005, 12:36 AM
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you could turn this one into a song! very deep!:sflower
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