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Old 10-25-2005, 07:23 PM
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You Say He Loves You

You hide behind the lines.
It's easy to find.
Something isn't right.

Friends come to see you.
They wonder why you're blue.
You play it off like it's all cool.

They must know but they remain quiet.
They're friends; They will be silent.
But "THIS" isn't "chemistry", it is merely science.

You try and cheer yourself up.
You keep your mind busy in the name of love.
You're not the first; welcome to the club.

You know it hurts.
They say: "Don't ignore it or it's a curse".
"I'm telling for sure".

I can sense your pain.
Eventhough you are miles away.
I can see the trace.

It doesn't have to end like this.
A beautiful mind gone to waste and caught up in the mix.
A beautiful mind in ignorance.

But I know you will ignore these words.
You want to live in the worse.
Yet you don't see it in that verse.


You will remain vulnerable to him.



Another different cause for these words to once again come into play: Love Is Blind.
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Old 10-25-2005, 09:57 PM
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Nice work Poetry, def could relate.
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Old 10-27-2005, 01:05 PM
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Great poem. I think it speaks for so many of us women who let ourselves become manipulated by the men in our lives. Though I do kinda feel like someone's smacking me upside the head right now...dunno why???
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Old 10-28-2005, 02:50 PM
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LOl. I'm definetly feeling this one.
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Old 11-13-2005, 07:49 PM
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I'm appreciative that you guys have expressed your thoughts concerning my work. I do only express what I have experienced but i'm also not afraid to go deeper and imagine in the realms of visualization and express my inspirations as well. But, you would never see me express THAT side in this section.
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Old 11-19-2005, 01:32 AM
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[B]Wow Love is blind and cruel....easy to fall in,hard as hell to get out!!
great poem believe me i feel it!!
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Old 11-19-2005, 03:24 AM
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Thank you.
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Old 11-26-2005, 12:32 AM
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i really love this one.......so very true. awesome once again!:scatter
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