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Old 09-22-2005, 11:50 PM
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I've been crying like crazy all night long,
trying to forget so many things.
I've witness and inhailed so much today,
i just want to disapear and be free.

I want to go where pain just disolves,
as i step into a new world of life.
I want to leave the life i had with you,
cuz the pain is cutting me slowly like a knife.

I wish i knew now,
what i was blind to see then.
That you were hurting me softly,
with all the painful words you once said.

I can't take this abuse any longer,
cuz sooner or later you'll regret everything you've done to me.
You'll soon come crawling like an animal,
and you'll beg for forgiveness on your knees.

I was so good to you,
i was everything you needed in your life.
I even made sweet love to you,
as i stared into your eyes.

You have broken something so fragile,
that could never be replaced.
You have taken what took years to built.
and didn't have the guts to see me to my face.

Now i stand alone in this empty room,
with my arms crossed and tears streaming down my face,
I could never look you in the eyes again,
cause your picture is now being replaced.
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Old 10-07-2005, 01:30 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Angelino
I've been crying like crazy all night long,
trying to forget so many things.
I've witness and inhailed so much today,
i just want to disapear and be free.

I want to go where pain just disolves,
as i step into a new world of life.
I want to leave the life i had with you,
cuz the pain is cutting me slowly like a knife.

I wish i knew now,
what i was blind to see then.
That you were hurting me softly,
with all the painful words you once said.

I can't take this abuse any longer,
cuz sooner or later you'll regret everything you've done to me.
You'll soon come crawling like an animal,
and you'll beg for forgiveness on your knees.

I was so good to you,
i was everything you needed in your life.
I even made sweet love to you,
as i stared into your eyes.

You have broken something so fragile,
that could never be replaced.
You have taken what took years to built.
and didn't have the guts to see me to my face.

Now i stand alone in this empty room,
with my arms crossed and tears streaming down my face,
I could never look you in the eyes again,
cause your picture is now being replaced.
Angelino, good poem and is it true?
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Old 10-10-2005, 10:20 AM
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Angelino, good poem and is it true?
THAT IS DEEP VERY HEART FELT I LIK EIT HOPE ITS NOT A LESSON YOU HAD TO LEARN CUZ LOVE CAN HURT AND IF IT WAS HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON AND FIND IT WITHIN YOURSELF TO MOVE ON
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Old 10-10-2005, 12:02 PM
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THAT IS DEEP VERY HEART FELT I LIK EIT HOPE ITS NOT A LESSON YOU HAD TO LEARN CUZ LOVE CAN HURT AND IF IT WAS HOPE YOU FEEL BETTER SOON AND FIND IT WITHIN YOURSELF TO MOVE ON
That poem was really good Lady Goat. I agree with you because i also went through a divorce and my ex-wife took my son. In the begging it was hard but now that i see my son every other week i'm cool with that. Take it easy Angelino.
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Old 10-17-2005, 12:39 PM
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Angelino, good poem and is it true?
Thank you ......i'm glad you liked it.....
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Old 11-09-2005, 01:24 PM
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Very nice Angelino.
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Tha Ghost Rippin Through your set like WOE!! Holdin It down alwayz :zoots
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Old 11-11-2005, 06:52 PM
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baby boy....you always seem to blow me away. Thanks for sharing....keep it up papa!!!!
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