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Old 10-21-2005, 09:16 PM
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Falling...

Your eyes, they burn right through me, so many words fill our silence
It's amazing how you touch me...with such intensity and kindness
Everytime I look into your eyes, I fall deeper into you...
I feel this emotion taking over, and this feeling is so new.
Your words, my ears devour, and all you say my eyes are seeing
Your eyes, they consume me and take over my entire being
You show me that you care, in your arms I feel secure
You are the one I want, and I have never been more sure
Your lips, they taste so sweet, I endeavor their sensation and yearn their sweet affection...
Just to feel them beneath my finger tips sends so many chills in my direction
What is it you feel when I touch you? I wish to be your skin, so soft as it were silk
How quick came these feelings, and how amazing is this foundation we have built.
When you look at me, there is no need for words, your eyes say enough to me.
And the yearning I feel when you're not near me goes deeper than the sea.
As my love for you grows immensly, you still can touch my heart...
With just a simple smile, as a huge flame comes from just a spark
You engulfed me from within, and now I want you more and more.
I feel like I knew you before I met you, you're who I've been looking for.
So as long as you let me love you, I will be right here loving you, each moment is its own treasure.
And as long as I am breathing, this love I have for you no one could ever measure.
I want you with my eyes, I want you with my mind, I want you with my body, I want you with my soul...
I want you with my heart, I want you with all of me, every inch...This wanting you has its own control.
Because when you look at me, I become a puddle...you melt me far into the deep.
And the thought of you wakes me in the morning just as it drifts me into sleep.
Everytime I look into your eyes, I am captivated, baby dont you see?
I want you here right now, just to have you look at me.
I'm falling.
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Old 10-25-2005, 10:39 AM
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Wow....I love the way you express your self....your poetry is the bomb....
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Old 10-25-2005, 06:39 PM
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Your eyes, they burn right through me, so many words fill our silence
It's amazing how you touch me...with such intensity and kindness
Everytime I look into your eyes, I fall deeper into you...
I feel this emotion taking over, and this feeling is so new.
Your words, my ears devour, and all you say my eyes are seeing
Your eyes, they consume me and take over my entire being
You show me that you care, in your arms I feel secure
You are the one I want, and I have never been more sure
Your lips, they taste so sweet, I endeavor their sensation and yearn their sweet affection...
Just to feel them beneath my finger tips sends so many chills in my direction
What is it you feel when I touch you? I wish to be your skin, so soft as it were silk
How quick came these feelings, and how amazing is this foundation we have built.
When you look at me, there is no need for words, your eyes say enough to me.
And the yearning I feel when you're not near me goes deeper than the sea.
As my love for you grows immensly, you still can touch my heart...
With just a simple smile, as a huge flame comes from just a spark
You engulfed me from within, and now I want you more and more.
I feel like I knew you before I met you, you're who I've been looking for.
So as long as you let me love you, I will be right here loving you, each moment is its own treasure.
And as long as I am breathing, this love I have for you no one could ever measure.
I want you with my eyes, I want you with my mind, I want you with my body, I want you with my soul...
I want you with my heart, I want you with all of me, every inch...This wanting you has its own control.
Because when you look at me, I become a puddle...you melt me far into the deep.
And the thought of you wakes me in the morning just as it drifts me into sleep.
Everytime I look into your eyes, I am captivated, baby dont you see?
I want you here right now, just to have you look at me.
I'm falling.

let's just say " DAYUM, OH HOW SWEET"
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Old 10-26-2005, 02:07 PM
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Im glad my poems appease you all. It makes me feel good to know u like it, and I appreciate u taking the time out ur day to comment on my writing. Someone very special is an inspiration to my most recent poetry. Thanx again. Mad love...
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Old 10-27-2005, 01:29 AM
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Wow thats some great writing right there man! :cheers
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Old 10-27-2005, 01:00 PM
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Another excellant piece Ghost. I said it before, but I like your style...
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Old 11-01-2005, 07:23 PM
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Thanx E and Dianita...I appreciate ur replies. I'll keep posting up my poems as long as CF is feeling them.
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