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Old 12-03-2005, 04:39 PM
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Take Care Of Her (To All The Guys)

When you find that girl, treat her right.

This girl will be yours for the rest of your nights.


Appreciate and make the love always there.

Show her that you love her, show her that you care.


When she trusts you, that's the most important thing.

Trust is as good as the greatest bridge a man could ever sing.


Trust is grand, trust is gold.

Once there, true love will be yours to behold.


Never let love become bore.

Always show that there's something more.


When she is sure of herself, and you are sure of yourself, and you both love each other......

Sky's the limit to romance in the name of lovers.


Let spirit take over and not ego.

Love her always and let it run beyond flow.


Treat everyday as if it were you first day with her.

Everyday is different and everyday is grander.


Open the door for her as if it were the first date.

Prioritize her, don't ever let love escape.


When you have her love, it is the best thing in this planet.

Don't risk losing it, get rid of any bad habits.


Learn to appreciate the things she normally does for you.

For she loves you, and it will never be in her intentions to make you feel blue.


Most girls just want someone to love.

Be just as dedicated, and two will be as one to soar above.


I'm not asking you to be Superman in her presence.

I'm simply asking you to appreciate the future or the present.


Take a look at what beholds you.

And you will see that love is true.
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Old 12-03-2005, 04:43 PM
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Bla bla bla...hard to find a man like THAT these days.....there is no hope. More like fantasy instead of reality.

Overall it was a nice poem.
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Old 12-03-2005, 04:49 PM
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Bla bla bla...hard to find a man like THAT these days.....there is no hope.
Be optimistic and you'll see things happen in your life.

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More like fantasy instead of reality.
I swear to you that true love can be as real as reality. I once thought it didn't exist.

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Overall it was a nice poem.
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Old 12-03-2005, 05:17 PM
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aww...sweet ass poem....words to live by for some.
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Old 12-03-2005, 05:31 PM
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Thanks mzcrazybtch.
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Old 12-06-2005, 09:57 PM
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great words, gives us ladies something to dream about.i do agree though,true love does exist...a little hard to find but it does exist. thanx for sharing.
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Old 12-07-2005, 07:32 AM
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Yes it does.

Keep dreaming and hold on to that dream. Believing is seeing.
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Old 12-08-2005, 10:27 PM
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Very nice poem.
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Old 12-09-2005, 06:02 AM
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Thank you
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Old 12-09-2005, 02:33 PM
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Thumbs up

That was awesome....
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Old 12-24-2005, 07:55 PM
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Great poem,you are very talented.
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It takes two unfortunatly..
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Bla bla bla...hard to find a man like THAT these days.....
I am like that with this girl that i love (Well just about to write her off) she has ignored ME for about 8 years and i really dont know if she appreciates the kind of friend i have been to her when no one else has,its really very sad

Beautiful Poem!
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Old 01-17-2011, 03:51 PM
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I am like that with this girl that i love (Well just about to write her off) she has ignored ME for about 8 years and i really dont know if she appreciates the kind of friend i have been to her when no one else has,its really very sad

Beautiful Poem!
Come on man, you can't chase after a girl like that who only wants to be friends with you. Stuff like that is just depressing. The second I sense the girl loosing interest, I run before she gets a chance to. Maybe thats why Im still single
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Old 12-12-2015, 06:53 PM
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Ya I hear ya buddy...... It was all her mothers doing really and now many years later I slightly talk to her but I dont know if I ever wanna be with ANYONE.... I have grown quite anti-social due to how fucked up the world has gotton since the 90s or so.....

I WANT NOTHING TO DO WITH THE SHEEPLE ROBOTS OF TODAY!! (For the most part)
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