Club Freestyle - The Freestyle Dance Music Authority

Club Freestyle - The Freestyle Dance Music Authority (https://clubfreestyle.com//index.php)
-   Deep Thoughts & Poems (https://clubfreestyle.com//forumdisplay.php?f=18)
-   -   >>> SIMPLEST THINGS IN LIFE <<< (https://clubfreestyle.com//showthread.php?t=50110)

sweetheart 01-18-2005 02:30 AM

>>> SIMPLEST THINGS IN LIFE <<<
 
I FEEL LIKE I'M FALLING......
I ASK MYSELF "AM I FALLING"?
OR IS THIS JUST A DREAM------TURNING INTO A NIGHTMARE?
*I'M IN A WHOEL NEW WORLD*
-------- IN THE MIDDLE OF HEAVEN & HELL --------
OR IS IT BEYOND HEAVEN?..........FUTHER DOWN FROM HELL?
I LOOK AROUND* BUT ONLY DARKNESS WELCOMES MY EYES*
TEARS FILL HEAVELY IN MY EYES>>>>THEY FALL AND MAKE A PUDDLE THAT INCLOSES ME<<<<
CHILLS OF FEAR RUN UP AND DOWN MY BACK>>>IT FEELS LIKE A MILLION TINY SPIDERS TRYING TO GET THEIR PREY<<<
THE THOUGHT OF BEING ALONE SUDDENLY ACCURS TO ME
THAT THOUGHT EATS AWAY AT MY SOUL<<<<>>>>>
AT THE SAME TIME IT NAGS AND LAUGHS AT ME.....GIVES ME NO SPACE ------NO ROOM TO BREATHE------WATCHES ME SO CURIOUSLY
ALL MY MISTAKES AND REGRETS COME CRASHING DOWN
RIGHT DOWN ON ME!!!
ONE --- BY --- ONE THE SUFFERCATE ME
I'M BLIND --- I'M COLD ------ I'M LOST ------------ HELP!!!!
ANYONE --- I DON'T CARE WHO ------IT COULD BE MY WORST ENEMY------------ I JUST WANT OUT!!!!!!!!
THE DARKNESS HAS ME TRAPT
MAKING ME FELL BEATEN *-*-* TORN *-*-* LEAVES ME FEELING UGLY AND SCARD
I CURL UP INTO A BALL....TRYING TO MAKE THE BAD DISAPPEAR...BUT THE MORE I TRY....THE MORE IT MOCKS ME
IT RUNS IN A CIRCLE ALL AROUND ME
POKES AT ME --- KICKS AT ME ------ HITS ME NON-STOP.
I ASK MYSELF
"HOW DID I GET HERE"? ~~~ "WHY AM I HERE"? ~~~"DO I DESERVE TO BE HERE"? ~~~ BUT THE BIGGEST QUESTION IS ~~~ "WHERE THE HELL AM I"??? ~~~
AM I ALONE? _-0-_ ALL ALONE? _-0-_
OR IS THERE "SOMETHING">>>HIDING>>>WAITING
READY TO ATTACK AND TAKE OVER MY SOUL?
I MISS MY FREEDOM>>>MISS BEING HAPPY>>>AND ALIVE.
_-_-_ MISS THE SIMPLEST THINGS IN LIVE_-_-_


JAN-17-2005





sweetheart 01-18-2005 02:35 AM

Error!!!!!!
 
SORRY GUYS I MESSED UP ON THE LAST WORD!!!!! IT'S SUPPOSED TO BE
"LIFE" NOT "LIVE"

WELL I HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT ANYWAY!!!!

Enigma 01-18-2005 02:43 AM

Hey sweetheart that was great!!! :heee

-antonio

LaIndia320 01-18-2005 09:29 AM

Hey mami that was awesome

musiclady2424 01-18-2005 10:45 AM

Wow that was deep. Sought out soul living in the dark.Lonliness is not defeated in this poem.Sounds like a soul behind bars Over comed with the mind playing tricks on you. rushed with a force of failure feelings not true but the minds scenery is like a film in it self playing.sorry i do have quite the imagination .anxiety and depression from Being a lone and hurt.almost a mystery but deeply felt. I love How it's expressed i'm not a professional but i know freehand writing when i see it. and you just let go huh. that's what i do.... i love it. girl keep them coming. a lot of pain,Suffering and mystery something like tales from the crip mixed with a great imagination and feeling. correct me if i'm wrong. but any how who am i . i love the work..keep it coming.I got the message [email protected] @**^^

sweetheart 01-18-2005 01:25 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by LaIndia320
Hey mami that was awesome

thanks laidia!;)

sweetheart 01-18-2005 01:26 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by musiclady2424
Wow that was deep. Sought out soul living in the dark.Lonliness is not defeated in this poem.Sounds like a soul behind bars Over comed with the mind playing tricks on you. rushed with a force of failure feelings not true but the minds scenery is like a film in it self playing.sorry i do have quite the imagination .anxiety and depression from Being a lone and hurt.almost a mystery but deeply felt. I love How it's expressed i'm not a professional but i know freehand writing when i see it. and you just let go huh. that's what i do.... i love it. girl keep them coming. a lot of pain,Suffering and mystery something like tales from the crip mixed with a great imagination and feeling. correct me if i'm wrong. but any how who am i . i love the work..keep it coming.I got the message [email protected] @**^^

thanks ml...i'm glad you liked it!!! i got the inspiration from you....reading your poems and talking to you has helped me out alot...thanks again!!!

NYPRCAN 01-19-2005 01:53 AM

yes, you do a great job on these types of writings. Thats why I look for your writings on a regular.

sweetheart 01-19-2005 02:45 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by NYPRCAN
yes, you do a great job on these types of writings. Thats why I look for your writings on a regular.

awww...thanks nyprcan!!! that means alot to me! glad you liked it too.

musiclady2424 01-19-2005 07:44 AM

what! "you got your inspiration from me"...wow thanks that means a lot to me. I never thought my poems that i've written would have any one inspired. thanks mama. i appreciate that .

sweetheart 01-19-2005 12:47 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by musiclady2424
what! "you got your inspiration from me"...wow thanks that means a lot to me. I never thought my poems that i've written would have any one inspired. thanks mama. i appreciate that .

I SURE DID! I TOLD YOU YOUR POEMS ARE REALLY GOOD...AND THAT I WANTED TO BEABLE TO WRITE LIKE THAT SOMEDAY!!!!! THANKS MA...I'M GLAD YOU LIKED IT!

musiclady2424 01-20-2005 05:35 AM

Your welcome .***music blushes**** iI never knew. but thanks you mama your good work also inspires me..Thank youuuuuu.


All times are GMT -5. The time now is 08:56 PM.

Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.11
Copyright ©2000 - 2019, vBulletin Solutions Inc.