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8th-Sin
02-06-2002, 03:37 PM
I wrote this years ago... when I used to write a lot. I wrote it under my pen name of DarkSoul. It is called Deadly Desires. It is the only one of my writings that I got published. Enjoy:

In the heat of the passion, the heat of the night,
Our bodies grow closer, and bright as a light,
We share our emotions and express our feelings,
We found a cure for love called sexual healings.

Emotions run wilder and so does my mind,
Confused in ecstacy we lose track of time,
My body belongs to you and yours is mine,
Our love is exclusive, it's one of a kind.

To please your mind, your body and soul,
I'll take you to ecstacy and that is my goal,
But the heat from your body made me feel hell,
As the rest of the story you are willing to tell.

You take of my shirt and expose my chest,
You run your fingers right thru my flesh,
You rip out my heart without no regret,
And mock me by saying "didn't expect this I bet?".

My life is destroyed, my hopes have been killed,
You ripped off the heart which your love once filled,
"I'll take you to ecstacy and that is my goal",
But now I'm a creature whose name is Dark Soul.

Crystal2001
02-06-2002, 03:43 PM
Oh my god......That was..That was SOOO beautiful! Thank you so damn much for sharing that with us! And how dare she take advantage of you like that! I would rip out her heart, then get back the one she stole! I was so into this poem, got hot there for a moment till the witch ripped out your heart..lol..That was BEAUTIFUL! Do you have anymore?????

8th-Sin
02-06-2002, 03:49 PM
I would have to see if I can find my notebook. I used to have so many, but I carelessly misplaced the notebook during movings a few years ago. I remember that one by heart cause... well... it is pretty obvious why. If I find more I will share. I am glad you liked it.

Crystal2001
02-06-2002, 03:53 PM
No sweety, I more than liked it...lmao! I have one word for it...wow

It was so friggen beautiful..You can tell you put so much meaning into it, it touched my heart. I hope you get to find more poems 8th..I love this one, and im sure ill love the rest...;)

Blankita32
02-06-2002, 04:21 PM
8th, that was a great poem. "HOT" !!!! Sorry it happened to such a great guy! Lots of luv here for ya!

Enigma
02-06-2002, 06:43 PM
8th-Sin!!! :D

Wow so well written. Very beautiful and heart felt. You got skillz! :cool:

~Antonio

taezee
02-06-2002, 07:53 PM
8th sin..i like that one man

MIDNIGHTeternal
02-06-2002, 10:26 PM
que caliente!!...

keep it up 8th-sin
ONE

Nyasia
04-25-2002, 09:41 AM
hmmm, forgot about this one. I get chills everytime I read it.

freestylevet
04-25-2002, 09:53 AM
8TH...THAT WAS INCREDIBLE...Like Crystal said,,,I'll rip out HER heart and get back the one she stole and KEEP IT FOR ME...YOU ARE ONE TALENTED INDIVIDUAL...GOOD LOOKS, BRAINS, AND A HEART OF SILK.

Please keep posting some more sweetie. I really enjoyed this one..IT HIT VERY CLOSE TO MY LITTLE HEART.

Nyasia
04-25-2002, 10:04 AM
I agree loulou...

freestylevet
04-25-2002, 03:20 PM
You see 8th? HOW CAN YOU GO WRONG WITH SO MUCH LOVE FROM THE GIRLEYS AT CFS.COM?

WE WUV YA BOOBI!!!!!:hearton

Krystal
04-25-2002, 07:32 PM
Once again I'm speechles! WOW!

Everytime I come to this section of CF it leaves me that way!

Beautiful writing 8th! ;)

8th-Sin
04-25-2002, 07:51 PM
I thank you all for these replies. I am glad you all enjoyed it. I really wish I could say it was a pleasure writing it. But hey, things happen in life, and what doesn't kill you... you all know the rest.

precious one
04-25-2002, 10:42 PM
That poem's beautiful 8th! I Love it!!!

FR3ESTYLEKING
07-25-2002, 03:59 PM
Holy Sh#t Batman (I Mean 8th Sin)

Crystal2001
07-25-2002, 06:01 PM
LMFAO king..glad you brought it back up here..I missed it..LOL..wheres 8th nehows????..hmmmmmmmmm

myonlysweetie
12-20-2003, 12:46 AM
Damn, 8th that was amazing! :D

atx
12-20-2003, 02:29 PM
Very Seductive Yet Dark Hun, Your Work Is One Of A Kind. ;)

Crystal2001
12-20-2003, 05:39 PM
Holy SHIT! This poem still gets a reaction from me! :drool

LMFAOOOOOOOO..Thank you for bringing it back!

LocaBoriquaQueen
12-20-2003, 06:21 PM
Wow, I really like this poem, that was really good.... The way it was written was so.... I dont know it just gave me chills...