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Sexyangel329
11-18-2001, 08:43 PM
I hope you guys like this is dedicated to my baby :)


Can This Truly Be

I watched as you lay asleep last night,
I felt you as in your arms you held me tight.
I closed my eye’s and asked God to make this moment last.
And he did as the time slowly past.
I awoke with you right by my side.
The smile on my face I could not hide.
I felt your lips touch mine,
I felt your finger tips as they traced my spine.
I felt the warmth of your body as you lay beside me,
I asked God can this truly be.
Like an angel so peacefully you slept,
I asked God where have you this angel kept.
Never had I imagined I would feel like this,
Never had I imagined how I would long for your kiss.
Your a blessing sent to me,
When I am with you its as if it was meant to be.
So many questions fill my mind.
I have never loved before could this be my first time.
You fill me with feelings unknown to me,
I ask myself again can this truly be.
Visions of you run through my mind,
The more I remember the more I want you by my side.
I want to thank you for the beauty you bring,
I want to thank you for how you make my heart sing.
See me when you close your eye’s,
Remember me when you lay to sleep tonight.
I cherish the moments we’ve spent together,
I look forward to the moments we will remember.
I have never known what you give to me,
So I ask once again can this truly be.

Enigma
11-18-2001, 11:37 PM
Angie, there are no words to describe that fantastic writing in which you totally opened your inner heart for us, and expressed yourself lovely on front of the millions. Nice work! Nice poem. :cool:

~Antonio

Elear
11-19-2001, 01:33 AM
*Shivering* 0o00oo0o0o0o0.....Nicccceeeee*Starts Realizing How Lonely He is* Tear *
*Looking At His Cracked Walls...And Starts Punching Them* ahhh...Much better...:D

brenda
11-19-2001, 01:45 AM
That was such a beautiful poem Sexy..Mesmerizing!!

mario5starr
11-19-2001, 04:56 AM
sexy...what can one say??? youve got a heart of gold..

like i said b4, that dude is one helluva lucky guy, tell him that for me!!

glad to hear and feel just how happy you are...aint love grand??:)

Sexyangel329
11-19-2001, 09:27 AM
GUYS THANK YOU SO MUCH I AM GLAD YOU LIKED IT IS VERY SPECIAL TO ME THANK YOU SO MUCH MARIO ENIGMA YOU MY SWEETY ELEAR LOL BRENDA THANK YOU AGAIN :)

Heavenly
11-19-2001, 05:58 PM
Yea that was nice and when I read it I thought of Bill......watching him sleep last night and damn I wanted to change some words around to fit my thoughts but I don't want to steal your work ....so I will write one of my own and post it .....:(

All I say is cherish it girl.....I had those same feelings and yet I feel sooo lonely now.

DESTINY11
11-20-2001, 12:12 PM
I know I got the preview to this one, It is awesome baby girl
Te quiero mama:)

Sexyangel329
11-20-2001, 02:05 PM
YOU GUYS ARE TRULY TRULY THE BEST I LOVE WRITING ITS MY PASSION AS MUCH AS SINGING IS AND WHEN AM ABLE TO SHARE WITH PEOPLE AND GET SUCH A POSITIVE FEED BACK IT IS A GOOD FEELING THANK YOU ALL FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART MUAH TO YOU ALL :)