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Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 10:24 AM
THIS I WROTE FOR SOMEONE VERY SPECIAL IN MY LIFE HOPE YOU GUYS LIKE IT :) MUCH LOVE AND THANKS FOR READING MY POEMS ;)


Can I

Can I be the one to hold you through the night,
To wipe away your fears and make everything right.
Can I be the one to help you leave it all behind,
To look to the future and release all that lays in your mind.
Can I give you heaven and ask for nothing in return,
Can I be the one to give you that kiss that touch.
Let me make love to your mind body and soul,
Dont ever hold back let yourself loose all control.
Can I be the one you look to in the dark of the night,
I promise to always shine upon you my light.
Can I show you happiness through my eyes,
I promise you never will you hear any lies.
Can I be the one you call for in the middle of the night,
The one you search for when you loose sight,
Can I be the one you long for when your body burns with desire,
The one to love you hold you please you and set your soul on fire.
Let me show you who I am inside,
I promise from you nothing will I ever hide.
Can I be the one to dedicate what I feel,
And always know youll know it is real.
So I ask you not once not twice,
Can I be the one to show you paradise.

DESTINY11
10-22-2001, 10:30 AM
BEAUTIFUL BABY GIRLLLLLL KEEP EM COMING MAMA :)

Blankita32
10-22-2001, 10:38 AM
Sexy, that was really beautiful. Good job and keep em comin...:)

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 10:46 AM
DESTINY OF COURSE YOU GOT FIRST PREVIEW LOL, THNAK YOU BLANKITA I WILL FO SHO :)

Martini
10-22-2001, 02:23 PM
beautiful mama! ;)

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 05:06 PM
THANK YOU MARTINI IM REALLY FEELING THIS ONE I PUT MY FEELINGS INTO IT FOR REAL :D

bigMARC
10-22-2001, 05:27 PM
I'm feeling it, mija....great job.

M..

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 05:30 PM
THANK YOU BIG GLAD YOU LIKED IT :)

bigMARC
10-22-2001, 05:40 PM
;)

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 05:46 PM
NO DOUBT NENE I AM VERY THANKFULL TO ALL OF YA FOR READING WHAT I LAY OUT THANKS AGAIN :)

brenda
10-22-2001, 06:23 PM
Two thumbs up Sexy!:)

Enigma
10-22-2001, 06:24 PM
Sexy...I been giving you my lovely answer thanks to the preview you sent me and me having first dibs. lol :p

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 06:25 PM
THANK U BRENDA ILL KEEP TEHM COMING :)

brenda
10-22-2001, 06:32 PM
You'd better...LOl!!:p

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 06:40 PM
LOL BRENDA WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO SHARE SOMTHING WITH US ENIGMA ;)

Enigma
10-22-2001, 06:56 PM
Originally posted by Sexyangel329
LOL BRENDA WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO SHARE SOMTHING WITH US ENIGMA ;)

I'm ready nena. Anytime! You want a sneek peek? LOL I'm ready!

lmao!

mario
10-22-2001, 06:57 PM
beautiful poem sexy........you almost made a pimp cry

shhhhhhhhhhhhhh :p

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 07:33 PM
MARIO BEBE ;) GLAD U LIKED ENIGMA SHOW ME LOL SINCE MARIO LEFT ME LOL:p

Enigma
10-22-2001, 07:39 PM
Originally posted by Sexyangel329
ENIGMA SHOW ME LOL SINCE MARIO LEFT ME LOL:p

Okay bebe, this is the piece: Let's work on this, or if you like, start from scratch something else? Up to you pooky puss:

Best Friends Can Be Best Lovers

Remember when we were kids and played together?
With the dolls I played Ken you played Barbie and set a magical story forever?

Remember when you moved one block away?
You thought I was no longer your best friend to stay.

Remember when we laughed and fell to the floor?
The time my toe got crushed by the kitchen flap door.

Remember when our parents joked of us being future lovers?
In disgust we looked at each other you said you liked me as a brother.

I need to finish it :p


(Poem starts as kids growing up together in the block etc etc, then leading to high schoolers, than prom, then seperation, then, together forever!!!)

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 07:46 PM
OK BEBE I SHALL WORK ON SOMETHING FO SHO :)

Enigma
10-22-2001, 07:56 PM
Okay. :D Me too tonight. I will write...it's fun, it's been a while I haven't wrote. :o

Sexyangel329
10-22-2001, 09:16 PM
NOW YOU SEE WHY I LOVE TO WRITE ITS A RELEASE FOR ME IN SO MANY WAYS AND IF I CAN HELP SOMEONES DAY BY THEM READING SOMETHING I HAVE WRITTEN IT MEANS SO MUCH MORE TO ME :)

Enigma
10-22-2001, 09:19 PM
Ang...heart of gold ang, heart of gold!

Sweetheart. :(

Sexyangel329
10-23-2001, 11:55 AM
AWWW THATS SWEET ANOTHER NICKNAME THANKS LOL:D

Enigma
10-23-2001, 05:43 PM
Originally posted by Sexyangel329
AWWW THATS SWEET ANOTHER NICKNAME THANKS LOL:D

I think I got like 1000 pretty names for you! lol! :o

Sexyangel329
10-23-2001, 10:17 PM
AWWWWWWW ENIGMA YOU SWEETY THANK YOU FOR ALL THE NICK NAMES PA :D I LOVE THEM ALL :D

Enigma
10-23-2001, 10:30 PM
Originally posted by Sexyangel329
AWWWWWWW ENIGMA YOU SWEETY THANK YOU FOR ALL THE NICK NAMES PA I LOVE THEM ALL :D

Hahah you welcome. :)