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Join Date: Jul 2002
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Emotional Today
My impatient heart cries as I put on a big, bright smile The irrelevance of me is too painful to conceive yet day after day the truth is on display. My creativity seems to have gone hence this poem gone wrong The qualities that I've love most have diminished leaving me with loneliness and tear that won't go away. Hang on, stay strong, it will get better that all persuade. Well, walk in my shoes just for today. I want to climb the Highest mountain and never come down, dig the deepest ditch and lay on the ground, I want to turn back the hands of time to before I was born and just stop it from that moment. I want to close my eyes and not see death yet there it is, beckoning me , whispering,seducing me. What am I saying, just too many emotions today, tomorrow I will try to make it a better day.
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... tinker bells rock... dayzd n confused suck ass |
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Join Date: Oct 2005
Age: 31
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Very emotional, I would say. Very dramatically captivating.
Only you have the power to sustain any negative energy coming toward your life. Make sure you are the one in control. |
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Thanks for the feedback and the advice Poetry.
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... tinker bells rock... dayzd n confused suck ass |
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mamasitas, thank you for sharing your heart and expressing your thoughts like only you know how. I could def. relate to these words and can advise you to hold on to whatever/whoever brings at least a little bit of peace, joy, laughter in your life so that you could get through. Amazing words...thanks for sharing.
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CF Senior Freestyler
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Ahh thank you mama..........
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That is powerful writing...at it's finest.
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Thank you sweety
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that was some deep writing ma....(((hugs)))
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Thank you mzb..........
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Join Date: Nov 2002
Location: I live in bridgeport and grew up in da hood, but managed 2 stay on the right path.I'm really into freestyle and poetry
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that was deep im feelin it
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